"Heads Up"
 

http://doom.dmusic.com

Track's called "heads up". It's still shown as "incomplete" because I'm wiating for N to send me his verse but this one's def a future classic.

oh, and you know the usual routine with me and links. One.

i liked this beat.. who cares though, the verse is the important part... I like ur flow in this, u actually kinda remind me of triple_n cuz of your voice, which is the only part I dont really like, and theres nothing you can do about it, but I think it kinda takes away from the overall track, cuz you got the rhymes, spittin it correctly, but ur voice is naturally monotone, so even though u kickin influctions into it and the dubs, and the little switchups, it seems like it needs more... i think its personal preference though, not tryin to hate on you... cuz u got skillz w/ the mic, keep droppin them songs...1

who did that track for you? pm about that, that is hot................................your flow is on with the beat, vox might b a lil loud, or that could just be my headphones. overall I am filling this song, not to much to talk about, I like the song, and I really don't have to much to criticize either, its a quality drop, peace


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850

Sev - Thanks.

Determined - Who did the track for me? I'm not sure what you're asking, but everything you heard there is 100% me (cept the beat). N mentioned a collab, I had the beat on a CD - hit him with a topic and boom. There it was ;)


Up for more feed from any of the dosens of people I've been leaving feed for weeks.

listenin...
voice is nice
quality seems it needs to be upped
flow was pretty nice as well as delivery
keep droppin tho!

over a big :thumbup: i told you before i liked the voice seems like you cleared up the reading lyrics issue from past songs also liked ryme scheme ide just like to see how diverse an mc you really are im actually waiting for some crazy un expected song thats completely diff from what u used too but i def liked this shit holla back on Tremendous~Verse

Thanks for the feed man - def appreciate it. As for a track different from the norm - sheeit, check "Devil Inside" on my music page. Actually..."One Thing" is pretty damn differnt too. Bout time I re-up that shizzle. Thanks again man, 1.

aiight dope beat...nice sample used...flow seems a bit shakey to bit not really smooth or polished yet...lyrics while being ok could come up on the metas tip and the similies tips...also could use some multis...(your punch ins t mad obvious) production could come as well get a better soundcard and mix and maybe a mixer...