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Mad Knight vs. Tweet
Verbal Emotions IV
Check in's are due 2 days after the battles are made. (Wednesday) Verses are due 2 days after the check in date. (Friday) Every participant has 2 extensions they can use. Each good for 1-2 days. Voting goes to Sunday at 6 PM EST/ 2 PM PST. Line limit is 20-30 lines. Every participant must vote on a minimum of 3 battles. Please vote on battles that don't have a lot of votes, it doesn't do any good if a battle with 10 votes gets another while one battle has under 2 votes. Topic: Locked Mouth REMEMBER! IF YOU NO SHOW THEN YOUR POSTS WILL BE CUT IN HALF! Good luck :thumbup: Two people will advance. Please put 1st, 2nd, and 3rd. |
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Y the fuck do i have to go againist Lola again can i not change please? |
Added in little detail I forgot.
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hey, rev....i'll do my best not to no-show, im in the city right now, on my girl's comp....do my best to drop, but this is just a head's up and a perfectly good reason, its not apathy, its i dont have a comp :)
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Locked Mouth
the events i've witnessed, accounts i've endured the haunting visions, i still havn't found a cure silent years pass by, each night my sanity mocked but my stories are ignored....for my mouth is locked _______________________________________ my apartment is messy, clothes scatter the floor had a date with the bottle, and a cheap corner whore she lay on the bed, and the woman right beside i dont remember much, except fucking three times got pretty high too, i just love to tote then a knock at my door...oh right, more dope its my dealer, i've known him since six we've been through it all, even doubled this bitch but he looked sick, said "sorry, its for my son" he almost started to cry, and pulled out his gun "what the fuck!" hit his arm, just as he shot the bullet smashed a lamp, but it didn't stop shattered the whiskey bottle, but i didn't care bout that mess the girl's shirt turns red, as i stare at her chest "you fucking shot her" grabbing the gun, i knocked him to the ground rolled down the stairs, his head cracking made a big sound now the neighbours are moving, i should've ran two people dead, im standing with a gun in my hand the cops had been called, when the shot was fired im now handcuffed to the wall, before i realized what transpired i didn't bother pleading, how could they ever know that my innocence was truth, this was accidental but i was already in the car, my sentance evident my life vacant....ironic, i'm prision's new long term resident my fate sealed by unorthodox occurances, my life spent so let these last thoughts be intelligent............ ________________________________ figure out the deeper meaning yourselves :)....don't know when i'll be on next, so i had to basically key this up.....plus its a stupid topic :thumbup: gl to e-one else in this battle, word. |
please could i have an extension till saturday!
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extenstion granted
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Locked Mouths Another day at work sitting enviously behind the counter Gazing into a day dream not realizing what im about to encounter Doors smash in as 2 men with gunz race to the front of the shop Gafting me without struggle as I scream SOMEONE CALL THE COPS Shoved into a black van not informed where im being taken Fearing for my fragile life my hands are unbelievably shakeN Vehicle comes to a sudden stop rushing me into the shady buildin Blindfold inserted to my face as I hear the voices of screaming children Pondering for some time why would I be there top choice to kidnap For I am no kid you see, maybe its just a mishap.. and they'll take me back Realizing my surrounding I take a more serious intake on the situation Placed ruggidly into a seat as I quickly ask, whats the purpose for this altercation Receiving a face slap, as my mouth with out question goes into a form of lock Being chained to a wall painfully with my jaw wired now not able to talk Struggling to resist the pain as Im being called some offensive names "YOU fuckin jew you must die for killing the almighty" this man claims Feeling my back propped to a structure, fearing the worst to happen My arms suddenly straightend out, when the facts started to snap in Me being a jew as got my mouth wired shut not able to get the proper use of it As I hear the door shut I silenty hang....Of of this terrible crusifix |
Born with a corrupted mind. Having difficulties picturing in my head Like One time I thought Lead was a woman tits..I found out ...............................It wasn't when the poisonous in my mouth it spread born with a sight that sees very different. I’m not normal like the others Like the time I thought A knife was a woman body figure .................................................. .That caused me an eternity of slumber we've been friends for a very long time, sharing everything together both like suns in any havoc weather. how about we spice the amber 5 years I’ve been looking at that smile but never gotten so close to it Tried so hard to acquit. Just listening to your voice makes me a spirit 5 years we've been friends. Tired of walking side by side. I want you When I'm around your presence i feel so hot like I’m having the flu I don't have to go to Hawaii or Jamaica for the perfect view there's you Losing control of myself and your the only one who can...Like voodoo Let's be me and you like the full-moon, there’s no half. Let’s be one Let's share our lust cold as Antarctica but with fire like a inferno dragon When you look at me what do you see a reflection of perfection? When there's a rose in a woman, there's a snake-inside being hidden On my face attach a mask, you fool. Couldn't even see the real me without saying open-sesame my kiss open the gates of your heart easily my tongue so sneaky, ejected poison inside you, without you looking Destroying everything in you as it lurks. slowly your life is disappearing You hear the soft moans from my mouth, but the lust is soo fake Foolish human do you not see the life I'm bound to take. Now you lay My smile is sharp and my beauty is do divine. Yes but I'm not human You've been cursed by me and taking your life using me was .................................................. ...........................................Not a good decision I don't have a mouth, it's sealed by the metal sharpness of my beauty sharpness cutting you in half...foolish mortal. Now your life is so puny The slashes creates my moan and you scream but I don't.......I love it Cums is not the color of white. But my favorite is red. Your life .................................................. ..........................................now has been ended I post this on RB and they didn't get the concept..so let me break it down like I did to them Mostly it's about a retarded person who see things differently...Now the whole concept of the verse is that He see's a knife differently..A knife is a woman to him...Get it? Some of ya'll might say "O your not following on the Topic" The Topic is Locked mouth...A knife doesn't has a mouth. Okdokey? |
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I've Definately Gotta Go Lola On This One.
Drakel, When He First Got Into The 'Kiss The Bottle' ... I Thought He Was Going To Go In A Sertain Direction With It Wich Woulda Been Impressive, But He Took A Completely Different Root Wich Failed To Meet My Expectations. Mad Knight, Although Had A Pretty Tite Piece ... It Was Very Off Topic. Instead Of Building A Story Around 'Locked Mouths', ... You Make A Story And 'Locked Mouths' Was Simply A Minor Detail Within It. Wich Sucks That You Did That Cuz What You Did Was Dope Just Off Topic. Lola... Lola Was The Happy Medium Between The Two Others ... She Gave Easier Metaphorical Speach Than Drakel, Coupled With A Storyline Matching That Of Mad's But On Topic All The Way Through. Solid Verse Overall. ... Please Return The Favor On Me And Deraged's Battle |
My Bad, I Forgot About The Voting:
1. Tweety 2. M. Knight 3. Drakel |
ahh i havent been active for couple days.. sorry bout that.. i'll check on everything wen i get home
-Dabatos ahh i guess Tweet n M-Night won.. but ya were like out of the 2 only battles that ppl showed in out of like 8? i seriously appreciate it ya.. i'll vote later |
so do me n Lola move to the next round:cool:
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