This is My Life- Conscious
 

This is a lil laid back track. Tell me what u think of it...leave some feedback and I will RTF. please try not to sleep on it cause I kno thats what yall do here, check it out.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=372546


Links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216815
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221361

Aiigh nigga...listenin....feelin intro and panning..youre voice needs to be mixed better...more lows...but its nice...flow is pretty nice...lyrics are nice...the vagina line is nice...hook is pretty nice...the beat aint feelin too much its too laid back fo this trype of track IMO...lyrics do stand out...flow is hot...in2nd verse...its a nice trakc..im feelin it...niggas need to peep u more..u got sum hot ish here...keep at it..

uppin this.............

lyrics is nice

emotions is kool

nice track, really feeling it and the message

over all its a good track dawg, keep droppin

hope to hear more

lets see.... not feelin the beat, could do with more behind, flow is nice... u remind me of big l ur voice that is andur flow at time, i think ur structure could use abit more variation, rather than landin on the snare everytime try landing in the middle of the snares... lyrics are good, i like the hook, nice quality.... im feeling this man, good shit, if u wanna get down on a track let me know and we can do suttin, respect man n keep puttin in work. pz.

yeah I hear alot of big l n' cormega. sounds pretty good, just needs polishin but sounds like your on the right track. beat was kinda empty but w/e keep doin it.

uppin this.............

Stop sleepin.........

BEAT:7...it was kinda boring....but it brought out your lyricz more....
FLOW:9.......u got one of the dopest flows on da forum....
HOOK:8...if the beat was better it wulda made it better u feel
ENJOYMENT:8.5...to me the beat kinda lowered the song but besides that ya flow was on point ya wordz were on point.. u was just on point mah dude...

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