Lyrical havok vs beyond Logic
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Murderin This Rap-Wanna-Be-Faggot, Typin Ya Verse In fUcKEd Up fOnt Is The Only Time Ya Creatin Lyrical-Havok/ 1
I’ll Break Ya Arm Off N Stick It In Ya Eye So You Can See ‘How I Write’/ Havin Ya Period Is The Only Time This Virgin Pussy’s Flow Tight/ 3 I’ll Knock Ya Down To The Sand So Ya Can ‘LICK-SHELLS-BITCH’, This KID-REPELS-CLIT/ 4 Ya CELLS-SPLIT I Eat Hell Just To SPIT-HELL-ISH, I’m Battlin This BITCH To EMBELLISH-MY-RECORDS/ 5 I’m Jumpin This Kid Like A King On CHECKER-BOARDS/ WRECK-YA-WHORE While My METAPHORS-TORE-YA-CORE/ 6 HAVOC’S-WACK, How You Goin To ‘Serve’ Me When Ya Can’t Even Make EASY-MAC/ 7 Ya Must Be Handin Out FREEBIES-JACK, Every Time Ya See ‘Pussy’ This Boy Becomes A QUEEZY-‘CAT’/ 8 15 min exactly |
Like skyscrapers, their ain't no toppin' me, like the lottery you gotta Fall Lucky//
I'll make your fleet retreat cause your Complete Arsenal couldn't defeat A Small Country// Ya style cant be savored, you couldnt have flavor if i appointed your glands// Your verses are like invisible periods because theres no point man// Wording on you is wasted, because every bar you key is just the basics// your hated and tighter on dicks than a jail full of high positioned probation anklets// I serve herbs with quickness, but battling fags like this is random// when he spits a show, the crowd sits down because no-one can stand-him// if u were beyond logic then you shoulda known what i touch turns to gold// i got blister flows, his magazine is just a cover up cuz i tore him through center-fold// |
haha my bad 2 min over......well anyways lets get some votes on this
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uppin 4 votes
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beyond you tookthis battle b/c of punches and multiples. your strucure was good.havok you did your thing but this over powered you with the punches. keep writtin though. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395
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look people lets get some vets in here to vote, these noobs dont know what to look for and im not questioning ur talent BL just the voting
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Nice Battle ....
But I Thought Havoc Edged It Out ...... Lh- Flow-8 Structure- 7....a Lil Stretched... Punches...8 Personals-7 Bl- Flow-7 Structure- Giraffe.......6 Lol.. Punches-7 Personals-7 Do The Math..... Vote-lh Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin
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uppin 4 votes cmon now
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yo my vote goes to beyond, he had way better punches and multis, plus i think he was better overall
vote goes to beyond return the favor at http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072 we need votes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
how many votes we goin to?
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