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Zone Out 03-18-06 12:44 AM

You's a Bitch..._______ Diss!!
 
[...I aint dissin nobody but this how I get attention..]
www.soundclick.com/zoneoutbiyatch
[...peep any 1 track and leave me some feedback...]

I left feedback on a couple tracks
Holla at me
shouts to my nigga Oreo in the Nati

wez_nilez 03-18-06 12:51 AM

peeping "Talkin Shit" aiight first thing beats dope...production is ok but U got to much high end on ya vox man U dig? flows ok stiff at some points but I can see U being nice in a few years,,,,content is pretty solid lyrics could be improved delivery and voice could be improved more emotion in ya voice might help not sure....

Zone Out 03-18-06 01:05 AM

damn
I just put talkin shit on there like literally 60 seconds ago
but thanks for the feedback

ILL GEE 03-23-06 03:40 PM

"world of war"

beat is cool... nice story telling mood..

this was actually pretty decent for someone who has never been to Iraq... kool how ya did the comparison with Iraq and the hood... kinda attempts to justify the shyt going on in da hood though (not a good thing)... but ya flow was better than ya normal and ya production is really starting to get better... i still got that track that you and i did... i can send ya the vocals if ya still wanna do that extra mix... but yeah... kool track man.... you starting to evolve


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