"True Story of a Bad Man"
 

New track I recorded today called "True Story of a Bad Man". Hands down one of my favorite tracks.

http://doom.dmusic.com


Links: as always, I feed on about 4 tracks a day on average.

lisatening:
not bad,i was desapointed cuz someone used this before,well cali lol but who cares,your voice fits with the beat,nice lyrics,nice flow,kinda like this beat
overall not bad,7/10,pretty good

return da favor on stay like you are

actually it was thirdselfg who rocked the beat first.. not cali.. he just shitted on it -_-

lol... I was gon spit on this, but its gettin mad over used. Still, you flowed aight. cali is gettin off on himself thinkin his version was sooo dope. haha. its mad wack. This was ok, but sounded like a older Spiderman cartoon with the way the audio was set up. Wasn't feelin that. You need to turn your music vol way up and blend them together a bit man. Holla at me - I'll get you a link to help with that. Lyrics I wasn't feelin, but track wasn't too bad man. Keep droppin. 1

I dont know how to leave feedback, my post was deleted

aight so far

im listening...

vocals is nice..lyrics is dope....style is dope...kinda not on beat on one part...dont like how you cuss alot ...expand your vocab......

beat is dope...
second verse is starting wack....you talking about hoes...no thats dumb...
you just talking about how e thug you are..lol
no this verse lyrically is wack....and you aint even spit on beat..lol

3rd versedont like how you started this hsit..but getting better...lyrics is better but your flow is off in some parts...BULLY..lol NO......kinda fell off in the end..


you should have took more time to write your 2nd and 3rd verse..

your flow was off in second verse
also your flow wasnt as great as you make it out to be
your voice has mad potiential yo
quality is not that good...
it kinda sounds like your spittin lyrics behind a beat...it doesnt really sound mixed good.

just jkeep making trcks in time you will get better...

i like how you kept that school shit going...

nice shit...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171392

RTF....on that...but if its gonna be hate..dont even put feedback..yo

Listening...

Blah beat...I hate this beat...nice flow, your voice is pretty sweet, but your quality needs a little work...nice flow, you got some talent, just keep it up. Work on ya quality though, because it sounds pretty distorted...nice track though. Return the favor. Link is in sig to my latest song.

lol quality was kinda - ehhhhhhhhhhh

But yeah beat was ill - and sample in the beginning was coo

Some good shit homie - keep on droppin

^^yeah, the EQing sonned the shit outta me -_- Thanks.