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no need for tha hate!!!!!!!!!!!!!
talkin**aha chea it yo boi kid ca$ u know how i do this is a livin legendz production so get ready...........................now put your fukkin hands up^^^
chorus... now just look around tha room,were all doin tha same thing...... whether if you make beats,or remix shit, rap.. or even sing.... cause were all here for one reason,on this rap site together....... so dont beef tha person next to u,hes only tryin to get better..... verse 1.... how u gonna hate sumone,whether they win or lose....... im sure this aint they life but it helps them improve....... i know for a fact they aint doin it for you,they love it....... and all u do is come on here to be a dickhead and talk shit...... thats for no one in general,but yall know who u are..... u spittin beef lines when your own rapz r under par..... i aint tryin to erk no body,im bein real as it getz...... you were a noob once to,or did ya mind forget..... i admit when sumone posts gay shit then they considered a herb..... but when u call sumone a noob cause they dont use tha right verbz.... i just dont think its right this is tha net so why hate..... especially when yall haters r tha ones who need to elevate..... so this is for all u people who think that your tha best..... but in all actuallity your rapz r just as plain as tha rest..... chorus... now just look around tha room,were all doin tha same thing...... whether if you make beats,or remix shit, rap.. or even sing.... cause were all here for one reason,on this rap site together....... so dont beef tha person next to u,hes only tryin to get better..... verse 2..... well this track is my appoligy to everyone that ive hated...... but i see it was dumb now,net beef is way too overrated... man people call people out three times in a day...... u made one fukkin thread bout it,what more can u say?..... go ahead hate,i know my lyrics r simple in this song...... but ive been here for a while,and tha shit still goes on......... but i guess it cant be stopped,just like people who smoke roc..... but still flash bakk in time ,like reverse hands on a clock..... so yeah its yo boi kid ca$,my messgage is like hyroglyphicz....... thats means most of u kidz that r dumb definitly wouldv missed it..... but i know alotta yall just wanna get better and have fun....... i know i met alot of dope people got better and i aint done..... so you rap bullyz and haterz,this song is for youz....... u can hate it or love thats your fate to choose....... chorus... now just look around tha room,were all doin tha same thing...... whether if you make beats,or remix shit, rap.. or even sing.... cause were all here for one reason,on this rap site together....... so dont beef tha person next to u,hes only tryin to get better..... chea this was ya boi kid ca$ and this was a livin legendz production im out :thumbup: |
This Wasnt Mad Dope But It Was A Good Topic And You Made Some Really Good Valid Points Here Nice Shit Overall Id Say Increase Your Vocab A Lil And Try To Be Alil More Witty In Your Punchs Overall Though I Enjoyed This............
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Some Good Points But Look Man You Need Multi's Real Bad Thiks Could've Been Off The Hook For Real
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Ayo i dont know why u spit dis it sent a good message........sometimes songs dont need hot verses they just need a message to get threw or u just got somethin to say and alot of da stuff u said was true.........so keep doing ya thang.....either way it had nice verses and a good chorus and a great message
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It Was Decent...
It Wasnt Really Anything Special For Me... I Think You Need To Work On Your Storyline... Make It More Complex With Twists And Such... Cuz Now Its Sorta Boring... Stay Up And Keep Writing Though... .One. |
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Hey, I'd Apreciate It If You Would Return The Favor...
"My Little Insecurities" ft. OSB http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192345 Thanks Alot Kid... Stay Up And Keep Writing... .One. |
I think tha flow seemed a lil slow to start off. I liked it tho. Increase your punches and vocab. Pretty descent topic, and chorus, and some nice verses, but just work on a few things. Not all that, but certainly not bad...
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good message youngin.............i feelits a popularity contest on this site..if your liked you get the win...if you not likes seeya everybody dogs you......its called survival of the fitest aint that a bitch!!!!!!!!!
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hey yo dog that joint is hot keep up the good work and go at these niggas hard this is ur boy babyfacegangstar holla back 1 love
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