DAZZLE vs Lil Roach
 

Battle Rules:

5 Lines Spit
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3 ko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-15-05 at 08:33 AM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.

Lil Roach has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 11:21 AM.

DAZZLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 03:45 PM.

Yeah......

Ima batter this bitch, kinda like a chippy batters a fish...
Fuck type you cant even speak to me bitch...ya voice so high pitched!!*
Tell me not to "start shit"!?! Why? Ya shits "overused" like a "pimps dick"
Shit bitch even ya pics been played out...........in 9th degrees sig.**
Even ya threats are unrealistic...like a fat chick with small tits!!

5 line rule was kinda wack but anyway
*=In his profile his age is 12 so his voice hasnt broke
**=That pic is being rocked by 9th in his sig.

(fuck 4 days man?!?! i did this in 10 mins!!)

nigga razzle dazzle yo name sounds like a retarded ass cereal//
i bet ya friends r da trix rabit and lucky charms guy but i will steal kill though//
u a fuckn ho that cant be lyrical where as ma shit is so magical//
my shit's like a plague and i m gon to fuck u up wit blade while u stil thinkn its a play day//
it stook u long enuff to fuckn check in but now i'm at the end so now gone i'm gone like da wind//

tok me 15 min !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
upn upn this shit to wen

Voted For: Lil Roach

aight reason
the reason why i vote fo Lil R

is becuase he had verse that was kinda of funny
his shit came out perfectly and pretty good
just my quick opinion
he extended his lines little bit to far where as he
made it seen like can could have been another
verse but since it was 5 line he put in one
so he lost 1 points

Verses was good nice word play and shit but
my favorite verse in his spit was his first one
nigga razzle dazzle yo name sounds like a retarded ass cereal
kinda of a funny way of starting off but it was good
he losses no points

his worst line was his last which was
it shook u long enuff to fuckn check in but now i'm at the end so now gone i'm gone like da wind
that really didnt go together wit the rest so u lost
2 points

overall 7/10

Dazzle yo shit was decent but some of the shit u said
made no sence to me but nice punches and flow

overall 6.5/10

Voted For: DAZZLE

im giving it to you dazzle, your shit rhymed, and the attempt was harder, nothing special here.......and its not cosby in 9ths sig, just to let you know.......last line made me chuckle though, beat the other dudes whole verse........and other dude, elevate alot, fast, or stop rapping

v/dazzle.....rtf yo

^ but cosby in sigs/avy's is played to shit......word

ight thanks man

will rtf now. .

upin even dough i'm gone
lose cuz ma shit wasn't dat
good

This was feedback posted for DAZZLE
 

alias......................
vote bitches.........

Voted For: DAZZLE

nigga razzle dazzle yo name sounds like a retarded ass cereal//
i bet ya friends r da trix rabit and lucky charms guy but i will steal kill though//
^^what, hell no, this is wack kid.....
u a fuckn ho that cant be lyrical where as ma shit is so magical//
my shit's like a plague and i m gon to fuck u up wit blade while u stil thinkn its a play day//
^^terrible, no punch horrible structure
it stook u long enuff to fuckn check in but now i'm at the end so now gone i'm gone like da wind//
^^gone like the wind, ok meta, but it had no punch..no diss
get me?..this verse was not good at all lil roach, if you wanna win battles youu gotta get more creative with ya bars n try
to make sure you diss him using unplayed concepts....no hate.
i suggest you stop battlin till you elevate.....

Ima batter this bitch, kinda like a chippy batters a fish...
Fuck type you cant even speak to me bitch...ya voice so high pitched!!*
^^decent, highpitch is played but it applys as a personal, so its koo
Tell me not to "start shit"!?! Why? Ya shits "overused" like a "pimps dick"
^^3rd line in a bar throws off your flow, try not to do this
Shit bitch even ya pics been played out...........in 9th degrees sig.**
Even ya threats are unrealistic...like a fat chick with small tits!!

^^closer was not set up correctly, set up 1st, then punch
.
overall your opener n consistency in making sense got
you this battle, try more elevated members next time, stay away from 3 line bars, it will help your flow, use set-ups before your punch,
not the other way around.....no hate........
return an honest votein the sig

This was feedback posted for Lil Roach
 

okay yo
Roach u fam, so i cant vote
i'm just checkin pollz an see'n whassup

u need help wit ya structure Roach, but ill-grammatix got that, he gonna help u elevate

good luck in the battle fam

Voted For: DAZZLE

homie u got it becus his shit dont ryhme the end of the bars are fucked up no mults on his no struter no nothing its all messed up the end of his lines dont ryhm togeather and he still need to elvate dont worrie kid yawl get better


i choice you becus of the mult and word play in some parts they tight but improve in voca you used the same words and same wound explore vocab and you probaly take over this shit iight hall at me return the fav if you see my battles post honistly