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Carlton Banks vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
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8 lines No crew votes No recycling No biting No d/r No hate Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 05-23-05 at 12:36 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 12:40 PM.
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talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal! your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring. cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things. i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared... cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there. got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions.. so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions! last bar= he got knocked out of korv by a keystyle, and hes recently done more topical and poetry than text...get it!? |
(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 09:05 PM.
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Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones Bastien Tel Fair is on the Portland Trail Blazers He is a FLY WEIGHT and Tom Jones sings Its Not UNsual..which is carltons fav song and singer... *Nuff Said* |
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straight verse, but you know that "not unusal" line has been used in every one of my battles chump. but anyways upping..
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lets get some voting going down here..
upping this. |
Voted For: Carlton Banks
Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will Nah....4/10 Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air Meh...5/10 Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class [B}So foreced, you had to say Fass instead of Fast...3/10[/B] Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones Coulda worded this better....6/10 Overall: 18/40 talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now. because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal! Funny...6/10 your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring. cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things. Word...6/10 i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared... cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there. Meh...5/10 got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions.. so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions! Hahaha....7/10 Overall: 24/40 Carlton Banks came harder in this with better, harder punches.. Vote: Carlton Banks Please return the favour with an honest vote.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=190590 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
boooooooooo @ carlton FAKES y do have an alias datz gay...aneway i have 2 go with jimmy....he played off dat fresh prince of bel air shit and i was feelin it shit was funny...cartlon i had some creative shit but last couple lines were very weak he had no real personals...everybody knowns he got koed in korv tell us somthin we dont know fam.. jimmy.p: Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will ^^^LMAOOO GOOD OPENER Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air ^^^^DOPE.... Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class ^^^LMAOOOOOOOO YO I LIKE DIS PUNCH Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones ^^^^SOMBODY SAID DIS 2 HIM ALREADY IN A ANOTHER BATTLE...BUT U WORDED IT BETTA cartlton banks: talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now. because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal! ^^^GOOD OPENER...VERY ORIGINAL your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring. cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things. ^^^DECENT i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared... cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there. ^^^WACK...TELLIN PPL UR AN ALIAS WONT HELP U WIN got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions.. so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions! ^^^OKAY... V/JIMMY..... RETURN DA FAVOR BOTH OF YA'LL.....OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER |
Wow carl your vote wasent explained at all...but itz coo ima leave it
only vote u gone get 4rm a kid who hatez me *Nuff Said* |
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