RdotGod vs Phantom
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 11:33 PM

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Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:34 PM.

RdotGod has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:35 PM.

Yo...

Its like...


Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion
Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste
When I say aliases only work...
...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE
Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin
And I want to here none'ya lip...
...flapping swollen in the wind
But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit...
Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit

You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!
Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done
But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1!
Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played
So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade
Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him
Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island
And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with
So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him!

Boo@you rushing me foo.

This was feedback posted for RdotGod
 

Damn... Good battle for 10 minutes or so... Actually, good anyway... Soc, ur first line would have made sence, if handing out slices made sense for a battle... Fav. Line...

Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!

Chrit... Funny ass shit... I find it funny how you can own people with such short lines (except for the one line that was the size of a short paragraph) Fav. Line...

Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade

Fucking hilarious...

Chrit took this battle... Good job to both...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164142
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I forgot... Peep that... Topical between me and nostra...

Voted For: Phantom

RDotGod:

Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
^^dope opener good metaphor 8/10
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
^^2nd line stretched but good meta decent punch 6/10
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion
^^another good meta solid punch 7/10
Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste
When I say aliases only work...
...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE
^^ lol nice bar 8/10
Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin
And I want to here none'ya lip...
...flapping swollen in the wind
^^ehh decent not feeling it that much 4/10
But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit...
Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit
^^good meta weak punch 6/10

overall : 39/60 (65%)

Phantom:

You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut
^^decent opener good meta 7/10
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!
^^lol good personal 7/10
Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done
But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1!
^^ehh wasnt feeling this 4/10
Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played
So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade
^^dope bar 8/10
Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him
Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island
^^hottest bar of the battle 10/10
And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with
So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him!
^^good closer solid punch 7/10

overall : 43/60 (72%)

vote: phantom

overall his punches were more consistent.. and he had a dope personal as did RDotGod and the rhode island line was sick.. chrit u probably would have got my vote if you had a different line than that swollen lip one i wasnt feeling that one but real dope battle

return the favor on any battle in my sig plz

Soc I seen you come nicer than this.

Chrit won pretty easily.. that Rhode Island punchis kinda played by the way.

Voted For: Phantom

Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
Ok punch here not dope aight nice wording
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
wack self glory line corny punch streched as fuck
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion
wack no puch again
Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste
When I say aliases only work...
...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE
Worde horrible streched punch had potential but aint live up to it
Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin
And I want to here none'ya lip...
...flapping swollen in the wind
wack as fuck no punch at all aint barely flow
But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit...
Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit
dope punch again worded horrible

ok chirt ive heard mega good things about you thats why i came to see this battle and you dissappointed me:(i see rb is still fulla d.rs cuz with this type of wackness is the only way youd be considered one of the best is dickriding this was wack:( a 3/10

You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut
good puch here nice flow worded good
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!
omg streched like a fat bitch in spandex punch was ok not dope at all
Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done
But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1!
lmfao dope personal good shit nicely dropped
Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played
So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade
haha another dope ass punch here nice
Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him
Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island
no wack and barely rhymed at all
And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with
So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him!
lol good ender here nice diss


damn phantom i should k.o you again for rec you starting to think your nice again a few dope ass puches good ass personal most of it flowed well except one line and that dumb ass rhode island shit a 7/10

basically phantom had way stronger punches and better personals here as well as a better structure and flow he had basically better everything.no hate to either just being honest phantom owned chirt.

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

Honestly, I wasn't really feeling either of the verses. I thought Chrit came a little....umm.....just not good. That hard lemonade line was just ass. You used to be pretty creative, but it seems like you've lost a little bit of your luster. Phantom/Soctrates wasn't too much better. His lines at least had a little creativity and wordplay in them, it's just that most of them weren't really hitting that hard. Anyway, I can't vote on this battle because Socrates is in my crew, so I'll just leave this as feed back :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

checccccckkkkinn pollllllssssss forrrrrr myyyy nukka

This was feedback posted for RdotGod
 

looking at the polls.. good battle ......................................

Voted For: Phantom



Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
4/10
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
3/10
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion
6/10
Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste
When I say aliases only work...
...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE
3/10
Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin
And I want to here none'ya lip...
...flapping swollen in the wind
3/10
But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit...
Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit
2/10

Punches were weak
wordplay was non existent
ya structure was aight
similies werent there
metas were ok


You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut
6/10
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!
7/10
Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done
But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1!
6/10
Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played
So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade
4/10
Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him
Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island
And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with
5/10
So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him!
u lost it a lil bit..I suggest u put forth effort next time
5/10

Punches were ok
wordplay was aight
structure was good
metas were good
similies were good

the last 4 bars were Garbage but u started off nice
I dont kno where doin Chrit but u lost this one hands down
came down 2 harder punches.wordplay and meta's

Voted For: RdotGod

punches all around harder...

Phant tried but you using my style + wack punches = not close to as dope as when I use it...
besides

Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion


these ate your verse... literally.


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