BigGMoneY187 [{To Fresh}]
Yo shits a work in progress i just wanted to to see what everyone thought til i got to far with it....
Link 1 Link 2 Money, to fresh, you know you gotta listen, and take a lesson learn from the game im pressin, watch girls im caressin your mission, shall you accept, pick up honeys wit out missin' get em in any position :hump: , have em bendin over with no Suspicion no suspectin. leaven em in the cold when you done hittin tell em what they wanna hear, but never listen to what you spittin just tryin ta get ya act on, ya mack on, den ya gone listen to me, what im tellin you, i got the expirience leave em delirious, my style mysterious, presumptuous i dont care if you a B-girl a harlot or a lady of the evenin a hooker a streetwalker, as long as this playa gettin what he needin easily said, not easily done, but half the day spent gettin, that one on one like a hand with no thumb, you cant get a grip, like they say ya need ta pop the cap for you get a sip Like i said not done yet but let me know what you think... |
this here was pretty decent, u had the flow,
pretty decent topic, nuttin much here, but u had a good drop though, keep it up 7/10 |
thanx for the feed
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alright, for bein your first open mic, it wasn't bad. I guess it was good for wht you were trying to do, but it doesn't really fit me as far what I like to see, there was really nothing there that stuck out, but, for what you tried to make it be...it was good
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thanx for the feed
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im feelin it its on some real pimp shit
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it was a basic topic...i still liked it though...some vocab and tight structure but tha topic was worn...but if dis is yo 1st OM then you got room to elevate (*like i can talk bout elavatin*)...but i gives it a 6/10...keep gettin hoes pimp...4real
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