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Zarbon vs Wise Ways
yo lets do 10-15 lines
blind spits like you said.. i will most likely put my shit up first cause i have to run in a little while..lets make this nice.. :thefinger |
Shit.... I forgot about this...
I'll post something up later 2nite |
Z's throwing cabbages.. but lettuice ain't tha only thing he tosses
Know why he ain't showing his rec? Cuz Z had 0 wins and 5 losses Ain't making fun of tha dude..but hey..competition wasn't an excuse I'd say face people ya own level.. But Z battled nothing but n00bs! Fuck insurance.. Ben making this chicken duck mo times than Afflack And that shit u spit's literally crap..spewed straight from tha ass crack 26 years old with a 0-5 record? Just gotta say.. don't quit ya day job You're beaten by basics.. cuz ya talents smaller than most spit wods Evelation's at ground zero.. never going up.. and there you shall die His custom text is a lie.. gave Z Hermes sandals.. and still wasn't fly Ya confused! got about as much chance of making sense as plastic cans Tha only time I seen you underground.. was viewing ya casket plans Speaking tha truth.. when I say ya flow's went rotten.. I'm telling it No one remembers you.. Make Zarbon tha lost and forgotten element No feeding... If you don't get tha punches... don't vote |
Waiting for you...................
Hurry up and drop ya shit |
yo i cant post till later tonight,,my bad dude :thefinger
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You in this forum..
Spit ya prewritten shit... Hurry up.. |
yo wise my bad on this,i forgot about it...
Everythin ya spit is false, let me show you foo Ya weakness lies in ya verse, and so do you So how do I bring straight facts about a lie’n homo If wise got the initial win,you must mean via No Show this herb is nervous, just a nerd who’s worthless and if you’re my reason for livin, ima serve my purpose In text yo shit is weak your scared making a pain for it Ya soil you pants so much,you added water n created a rain forest I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do If there's shadow of doubt,it's prolly wise standin behind you wise sucks dick, a fag that's tired, n he's an awful disgrace So I give em a towel, just to take a load off.... of his face You are weak,n put up fights,though your a lil fraile bastard wise always have drama in hand... like unprepared actors Sorry your mother didn't want you, lemme put it in actions She spent more hours in labor, pushing... you back in Fact is people were lying when they were bluffing you should Be happy,you're not good for nothing you'll just be nothing... for good |
ok so you said 10-15 and spit 18 lines......maybye you shoulda read that...which kinda fishy makes me think its pre written...nut lets just sayits not...you still lost wise ways had way better personals punches and vocab....zarbon you had nice wordplay but for real i wasn't feeling the punches ......so you lost becase you came to soft next time try to be in the zone and spit when you say you will....wonner wise ways ..hit this up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109696 |
Yeah... You didn't follow ya own rule....
10-15...And you spit 18.... Did seem a lil prewritten.. considering tha fact there was no personals #1 |
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yeah true..no lies,i had some of it for ya ,but i forgot about this battle my bad take the win if you want it like that.. |
This Was A Nice Battle But Wise Took It Easily With The Punches,Wordplay,Vocab Etc..
VOTE=WISE WAYS Return Da Favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109032 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109612 |
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..........Vote please |
Z's throwing cabbages.. but lettuice ain't tha only thing he tosses
Know why he ain't showing his rec? Cuz Z had 0 wins and 5 losses Ain't making fun of tha dude..but hey..competition wasn't an excuse I'd say face people ya own level.. But Z battled nothing but n00bs! Fuck insurance.. Ben making this chicken duck mo times than Afflack And that shit u spit's literally crap..spewed straight from tha ass crack 26 years old with a 0-5 record? Just gotta say.. don't quit ya day job You're beaten by basics.. cuz ya talents smaller than most spit wods Evelation's at ground zero.. never going up.. and there you shall die His custom text is a lie.. gave Z Hermes sandals.. and still wasn't fly Ya confused! got about as much chance of making sense as plastic cans Tha only time I seen you underground.. was viewing ya casket plans Speaking tha truth.. when I say ya flow's went rotten.. I'm telling it No one remembers you.. Make Zarbon tha lost and forgotten element _________________________________________ yea umm this was really good,i prefer 10 lines but 14 i guess is cool too so i give this a 9/10 cuz evry piece can be improved a lil more k __________________________________________ Everythin ya spit is false, let me show you foo Ya weakness lies in ya verse, and so do you So how do I bring straight facts about a lie’n homo If wise got the initial win,you must mean via No Show this herb is nervous, just a nerd who’s worthless and if you’re my reason for livin, ima serve my purpose In text yo shit is weak your scared making a pain for it Ya soil you pants so much,you added water n created a rain forest I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do If there's shadow of doubt,it's prolly wise standin behind you wise sucks dick, a fag that's tired, n he's an awful disgrace So I give em a towel, just to take a load off.... of his face You are weak,n put up fights,though your a lil fraile bastard wise always have drama in hand... like unprepared actors Sorry your mother didn't want you, lemme put it in actions She spent more hours in labor, pushing... you back in Fact is people were lying when they were bluffing you should Be happy,you're not good for nothing you'll just be nothing... for good ___________________________________________ this had 18 lines and the flow wasnt all that great,shorten ya lines and use like 10 really hard ones instead of just scattering them skills overall 7 1/2/10 ratio on this verse........................ ___________________________________________ vote/Wise Ways |
WW
obviuosly took this battle he shud stop battleyn Newbs Cuz his record his fake..really just a bunch of wins of newbs.. but us till take my vote cuz u battle newbs all day..if u battled me or competiion like meud get ya ass tore up/ Vo-te ww Hit the lnik i left an Read sum real skillz an vote..pc http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536 |
though i hate this bitch so fucking much but im going to drop the beef for one second and see what i think............
Flow:both.... strucuture>>>>><<<<both der....same Punches>ww...more witty shit from him personals::ww...none from the other due...if im just tired or i dont see any... multis...bla... overall:ww.....he cmae harder in my eyese....no hate....at least drop the beef for 2 mins and hit my battles up....thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109693 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699 no hate just honest opinion on what i read....WOW i actually voted my enemy....i must be tired |
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