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Hotstudalrt 01-12-05 04:00 PM

Hotstudalrt vs adrenaline
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-05 at 04:00 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-12-05 04:01 PM

Hotstudalrt has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:01 PM.

System 01-12-05 04:08 PM

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:08 PM.

Hotstudalrt 01-12-05 05:14 PM

Adrenaline your over powered, overwhelmed, pale, pallid, puny, regular basis your spits are fony, u say a verse take a shit, cough, throw a fit all in the same pulse, your underware talks, your turtle head streaks, sneak down between ur ass cheaks in disbelief of not making an attempt to clean, your joe dirt don't have enough money to buy ur girl a skirt with the matchin shirt, meet me in a battle start of a new game maybe u can't beat me anyway, u need to finish ur scrimmage im givin u an image, prescent percent zero, content of ur words r already have done, the only thing better is the votes on me, while u sittin at home on the internet with a 3 year old eatin dungarees the way it should be!

Adrenaline 01-13-05 09:31 AM

look negro im spittin it hotter,ur simply a bother,go find ur father
im makin u slippin n' fallin,u aint really ballin,ur just for callin//
im destroyin ur image wit hard enough grimace to redirect ur pilgrimage
if u cant handle these insults,battle the "dim bolts",ur just a "dim jolt"//
there's no other emcee fatter than me,im easily gettin cheese,like fat bastard on tv
ur only a "pickle" to toy with,like a "vibrator" girls choose to "boy with"//
im just "mad-ill",even when am standin still,im a drastic hill
u couldn't climb me if u packed heavy gear and a master drill,that's "sad still"//
i bet this kid's internet is slow as aol,and he's "buggin" out like a "virus" with a "fillet-of-fill"//
my rhymes aint even gotta make sense to kill yo
check it. abigabigabigabiga u suck like a punched in dildo//
everybody in da club get tipsy,like jae-kwon wearin hills like a gypsy
this kid was never meant to be,even his momma knows
he probably left school cuz he thought he would be famous for his trashy flowz//
man i killed u five times before u hit da floor,im definately raw
im comin back wit a vengeance like bruce willis or schwarzenegga//
it's "over" like a mobb deep flow...i aint even gotta "say no more"//

Adrenaline 01-13-05 11:56 AM

ayo get them votes in...

Hotstudalrt 01-13-05 03:12 PM

pick up on the votes peeps, tear this guy up where he never seen it comin

Adrenaline 01-13-05 03:21 PM

definately get votes in...rite now I wanna freepost all over this cuz no-one's not votin... :cussing: :cussing: :cussing:

Hotstudalrt 01-15-05 04:00 PM

hard decisions , come on peeps get these votes in , ight then out thanks

Adrenaline 01-17-05 03:56 PM

vote!!
^^

....Gone.... 01-17-05 04:07 PM

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline-Ok kid um, nice verse, with some good punches and good wordplays. Meta'z i seek in your verse was nice. Punches were very effective. Flow was chopped up in some places, elevate on struture ok.


Hotstudalrt- Ok, kid. You had Very bad verse. Flow was chopped,made it hard to read. Punches "eh" wasnt that good homie. Elevate. Wordplay, i seeked them in your verse but wasnt good.




overall-This goes hands down to Adrenaline, cause he had better flow with some good punches. Wordplay was good, meta'z also. Still elevate on struture fam, the flow was chopped up in some places. Hotstudalrt, sorry to tell you, but you lost this battle. You had horrible flow, fix your struture. Punches werent that good. Wordplay I did seeked in your verse, but still wasnt good enough to pull the victory.


peace.

Adrenaline 01-18-05 08:22 AM

word up fam...also y'all chek out my first open mic in the sig..mad multi's...
like I said b4 peeple:

vote :shoot:

Adrenaline 01-18-05 04:19 PM

vote or die!! people!!

and forget my OM...it turns out wack!! it has no meaning..but why am I telling you this?

*turns away and leaves* :huh:

~Lady Fiya~ 01-18-05 06:53 PM

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline took this battle by a land-slide... he had sum metas with punches, ya closer was not very effective however.. but ya flow was nice, structure was nice...

best lines were:
u couldn't climb me if u packed heavy gear and a master drill,that's "sad still"//
i bet this kid's internet is slow as aol,and he's "buggin" out like a "virus" with a "fillet-of-fill"//
^^ha nice one.. one thing i must say to both of you, is that you both need to get more personal.. and lose the filler lines.. Hotstudalrt ya flow was aight, but ya structure not good at all... and you need to get more complex wit ya verse.. but wit that said i vote/ Adrenaline.. his stuff was complex and had a few punches that were enuff to take the win.. :thumbup:

Adrenaline 01-19-05 08:39 AM

word up fiyah!! keep votin peeps...

ayo so far im winning all my three battles haha, and im going to tie my losing streak of 4 wit a winning streak of 4..that's like a double double!! YAYA..u dun know!! :thumbup:


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