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Compromise
i take a moment to think, and confront the days i've been haunted.. by conforming to not say what i mean, instead I said what they wanted.. now i'm stuck here trapped in a cube, so i get sparked in a room.. my heart is consumed by knowing my words have only been partially true.. what do i do? honestly...it's honesty that will set my mind free.. so i'll just sit here and wish theres..a quicker way to put the future behind me.. maybe i'll be reminded..when I ask the question, "what did i start for?" my heart warms, when i realise i wanted to transcend this art-form.. but how? that's a question that seems to pose answers hard to risk.. river flows far and thick, fuck the blow-back , now i hold my heart in this.. so i storm beaches, and dig in the sand untill I find the vintage me.. i'll write how i want, the words you see is all you need for imagery.. this energy splits into synergy..composing thoughts into rhythm.. but it empties me to think outside of the box that we live in.. now i'm locked and imprismed..once again trying to bend light.. i've been quite, confused as to how get this to end right.. and see, that's just it..i need to say goodbye to these trife smiles.. but saying goodbye to compromise, is saying goodbye to a lifestyle.. |
i'll have links tomorrow........
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I liked it man, you def have potential. Had some of good mulit's
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Pretty good. I think you strayed from your multi's a bit this time around but it didn't take away from your verse any. Quite a few lines that stuck out more than others, not to say the others weren't good too. Some were just better. Lol. Overall a good peice for the length.
this energy splits into synergy..composing thoughts into rhythm.. but it empties me to think outside of the box that we live in.. ^Good line. |
This seems oddly familiar somehow, yet I can't quite put my finger on it.
Good shit bro. :thumbup: |
i take a moment to think, and confront the days i've been haunted..
by conforming to not say what i mean, instead I said what they wanted.. genius! and the line sayin find a quicker way to put the future behind me... amazing bro... very nice word play... been awhile since ive heard some shit like that... but then again i havent been on RV for a long as time.. but very nice shit... my life kinda smiliar or atleast thats how i feel it is at times...only the truth can set our minds free.... keep droppin...fam, shit is good |
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