sit down hataz
 

yo/dese dudes still hatin cuz i fuck day mamiz/run up/i swear to god u get folded like laundry/ha ha/stop hatin on getti/pop pop/datz what u get for being top heavy/catz is sloppy/like manwich sandwiches/i cock hammaz/god dammit/dont make pop dis cannon bitch/i hold my town on my own/put da crown on my dome/im da king like lebron/and i ride on 23's/bitch/u know da kid is sicker den hiv/fuck it/now im talkin out my ass/like my throat was my intestinse/and when i talk i pass gas/da semi/got a name/i call her vanessa/she got a man/his name is milli/he sleeps under da dresser/catz fold unda pressure/and i stand up str8/catz throw up the first bite and i scrape da plate/dats y it pays to be diferent/bitch u talk about thug life/but i live it/beligerent idiot/dont make me ripu2shreadz/ill put ya leg were ya face is like a potato head/muh fucka/

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tell me how u feel
 

yo let me know how u feelin dis .be real with me i just started this so help me out.