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SKAAL 08-14-07 05:47 PM

SKAAL vs ransum
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-07 at 05:47 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

System 08-14-07 05:48 PM

SKAAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-07 05:48 PM.

SKAAL 08-16-07 02:33 AM

hmmm too busy to accept you must really be scared

System 08-16-07 05:22 PM

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-07 05:22 PM.

Ransum 08-17-07 03:08 PM

how many lines u droping so i can match them????????

SKAAL 08-17-07 03:12 PM

i'm a just do a 16 keep it simple and easy .............

SKAAL 08-17-07 03:53 PM

i'm here!, i'm bout to hold ransum for ransome
and give hiim sixty shots once i brandish tha handgun
damn son, braggin 10 wins that's alot to you?
pm'd ya voters dick rydin like a prostitute
you 'perfect health' my 'sick scripts are a drop~of~flu'
you couldn't make a punchline 'stick with a box~of~glue'
melt ya wig like i'm burnin down a manequin
uzi up ya kness to garauntee you'll never stand again
ran start panicin reload.. cock.. blam again
commit genocide on ya tribe like we africans
he can't be trusted like sneaky~back~stabbin~friends
you used to be great like a old beat~and~battered~benz
i'm highly flammable a wild caged animal
my rage'll rip him open then i'll feed him to the cannibals
my vice grip is mandibleya clout more like anti-pull
i'll squeeze tha steamer give you wings like a red bull

1 yaself

Ransum 08-19-07 02:26 AM

This bitch think hes raw an uncut....til he got circumsized...
cuz ya battles are good 'around here'... like u battling circus-guys...
There ain't no way skaal verse is efficient...
each one of my punches i'll make u roll over like cingular minutes...
ya only retaliation is im 'ducking and u'r-gay'...
But battleing u is a waste of my 'fuckin time' like foreplay...
i'll twist ya head back an smack it forward.. to take ya hype- away...
why u trying to warm up to get served... like a microwave...
none of u'r metaphors are bangin' they back-fire...
i'ma jack this nigga up... like i'm changin a flat tire...
ya sound aint hot... there more like local trash...
So i'ma snap skaal in two like quick countdowns for a photograph...
these dude' i'll get fuckin crucified to bones next...
cuz this fruit is 'nuttin' to my lines like 'phone sex'...
MOTHER FUCKAH....

YOU NOT FUCKING WITH ME...
AT ALL....
EZ....
7 bars is all you get... FAGGET!!!

and im drunk BITCH WHAT!!!

KM 08-22-07 11:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 
IP:


This bitch think hes raw an uncut....til he got circumsized...
cuz ya battles are good 'around here'... like u battling circus-guys...

^^^^^ 4/10 naw the circumsized punch doesn't go together...with raw and uncut....to different meanings ....

the "battling circus guys" punch could be worked on 6/10


There ain't no way skaal verse is efficient...
each one of my punches i'll make u roll over like cingular minutes...

^^^^^^^^ nice lol 8/10

ya only retaliation is im 'ducking and u'r-gay'...
But battleing u is a waste of my 'fuckin time' like foreplay...

^^^^^ ehhhh could be worked on 6/10

i'll twist ya head back an smack it forward.. to take ya hype- away...
why u trying to warm up to get served... like a microwave...

^^^^^^decent 7/10
none of u'r metaphors are bangin' they back-fire...
i'ma jack this nigga up... like i'm changin a flat tire...

^^^^^^another decent punch 7/10
ya sound aint hot... there more like local trash...
So i'ma snap skaal in two like quick countdowns for a photograph...

the "sound aint hot" punch and "local trash" dont go together 4/10

but the "photograph punch" was nice 8/10

these dude' i'll get fuckin crucified to bones next...
cuz this fruit is 'nuttin' to my lines like 'phone sex'...

^^^^^^ehhhh wasn't enough for a punch 5/10
MOTHER FUCKAH....

overall decent verse ive seen better from u though especially with the punches....


next!!!!......



i'm here!, i'm bout to hold ransum for ransome
and give hiim sixty shots once i brandish tha handgun

^^^^^^^^the "ransum for ransome" line is played....4/10

the "brandish tha handgun" not bad 6/10

damn son, braggin 10 wins that's alot to you?
pm'd ya voters dick rydin like a prostitute

^^^^^no that punch was to simple 5/10

you 'perfect health' my 'sick scripts are a drop~of~flu'

^^^^^^^^ haha nice 8.5/10
you couldn't make a punchline 'stick with a box~of~glue'

^^^^^this punch could be worked on 6.5/10

melt ya wig like i'm burnin down a manequin
uzi up ya kness to garauntee you'll never stand again

^^^^^^ ehhhhhh nothin in it really 6/10
ran start panicin reload.. cock.. blam again
commit genocide on ya tribe like we africans

^^^^^^decent 7/10
he can't be trusted like sneaky~back~stabbin~friends
you used to be great like a old beat~and~battered~benz

^^^^^^ nice liked how u used the multis here 8/10

i'm highly flammable a wild caged animal
my rage'll rip him open then i'll feed him to the cannibals

^^^^^^not really anything its just there lol 6/10

my vice grip is mandibleya clout more like anti-pull
i'll squeeze tha steamer give you wings like a red bull

^^^^^played on the red bull line 5/10


overall u went up and down Skaal....i think that "perfect health" line was your best punch it was more creative than the others....more of your lines should of been like that one....the rest didn't seem u were trying.....if i was to vote id say Ransum got this cause of being more consistent with punches....i say yall have another battle though cause ive seen better from both of u....~1~ yall stay up

Deathblow 08-23-07 02:28 PM

Voted For: SKAAL

Fuck! Skaal destroyed you ransum. His hits had more force behind them and he flowed better.

Unexplained vote removed

Ransum 08-24-07 12:49 PM

lol..... nob.... shit not explain........................

Ransum 08-29-07 05:58 PM

upp'in for more votes..................................

SKAAL 09-26-07 10:51 AM

uppin on mo gen tryna get these joints closed pleased

lk63 09-28-07 04:12 AM

Voted For: SKAAL

Ranum

This bitch think hes raw an uncut....til he got circumsized...
cuz ya battles are good 'around here'... like u battling circus-guys...
ok

none of u'r metaphors are bangin' they back-fire...
i'ma jack this nigga up... like i'm changin a flat tire...
not good

ya sound aint hot... there more like local trash...
So i'ma snap skaal in two like quick countdowns for a photograph...
yeah I see what ya tryna do…but ur over doing it(comparison)

most important part of verse ENDING
second most important part INTRO
don’t forget this….

SKAAL

damn son, braggin 10 wins that's alot to you?
pm'd ya voters dick rydin like a prostitute
hahaha

you 'perfect health' my 'sick scripts are a drop~of~flu'
you couldn't make a punchline 'stick with a box~of~glue'
nice

ran start panicin reload.. cock.. blam again
commit genocide on ya tribe like we Africans
yeah

my vice grip is mandibleya clout more like anti-pull
i'll squeeze tha steamer give you wings like a red bull
nice

EZ win \V/ SKAAL

C-Bo 10-04-07 02:39 AM

Voted For: Ransum

Punches:Ran
Creativity:Ran
Wordplay:Ran
Flow:SKAAL
Personals:0

Explanation:Ran killed dis bitch...nice drop son...hard punches and nice creativity...Skaal came aight but some of lines were jus too simple

Vote: Ransom


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