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Tolerant Level vs Scenario
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-07-04 at 10:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Scenario has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:29 PM.
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Tolerant Level has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:29 PM.
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scenarios so weak he be -'sukin caps' while i 'Reload clips'
it dont mean u be 'fukin dick' yah shit be push back like yah head when the bullet hit yah 'ear-lobe quik' this bitch be havin 'Mental Flaws' yah 'Sentinial calls' u should give yah 'Dental record' when i boot yah teeth with 'Metal bar-stools' you should "fear this stranger" u should run but u cant 'hear my danger' but when i 'stear my anger' yah face will be dintted but ill rip yah 'ear off sir' u got the worst case 'senario' u be gettin killed in play land like 'super mario' i see u 'jewish kid' i 'spew yah shit' dont mean u can 'wish for it' when i 'stomp yah ribs' while the chrom bars ..u be 'coppin some hits' ill leave yah face 'scared and barred' from reality cause now u been 'alarmed hard' but i still get a 'dis-charged' aiight good luck bro |
sorry it sorta camme abit over the limit didnt mean to yo but uppin yah verse
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battle me? kid ya game is short like dwarf statures
ya rhymes are full of shit almost like horse pastures 2-7 ya not even near or remotely close to my level * kid stay under my bars like floor panels under pedals ya bars show that u need help~so go home and practice talent don't exist like parapelegics doing back flips this kids a faggot~he screams, when i smack he squeals run away from this match like jamaicans with track and field for killing u i know i'll be incaged in a slammer only time u get shot at is when u play with a camera *his record is 2-7 and the last half of his name |
we got a cheater here, i don't care if it's one bar over, he still cheated
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fuk yo u just want quik easy wins u bitch stop bein such a gurl and take yah lose like a real mc afggot
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bitch if u would follow the rules faggot, aight we uppin for this shit
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Voted For: Scenario
OK battle but all in all I say Scenario won it, simply because his verse flowed better and and had more original punches...Tolerant u need to take all them dashes & quotes outta ya verse man and try focusin on just one hard punch in each line...make it short & sweet |
Voted For: Scenario
dis battle goes to scenario.....here the breakdown punches scenario personals scenario flow scenario structure scenario opener and closer scenario vote scenario this was 1 sided in my opinion no hate...return the favors...the links are in the sig... |
Voted For: Scenario
yo scenario u had some hard punches with horse pasture and the pedals thing was pretty good thinkin.tolarent level u had some pretty good structure, but there were barely any punches to it. so thats something u need to improve on. my vote goes to scenario. winner-scenario |
i appreciate the vote soul sickness but i want an honest win, so whoever corrects votes or whatever, they have to correct this cause soul sickness is in my crew and it says no crew votes, thanks for the vote though, but i can't take it
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uppin for this shit people, look at that tolerant i'm up 2-0 now who should take the loss like a faggot, lol
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Voted For: Scenario
damn this is one onesided battle 4sho please no one use any gun rap in battles PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not even in freestyles do you use gun rap in a battle now senario: you seamingly always are packed wit wordplay and that's tight as fuck...just don't use them to glorify yourself punches were nice structure was nie and very legible and flowed nice say 8/10 TL: kinda dissapointing verse 4 real structure was VERY bad punchlines were either played or glorifying the flow was ok but it didn't connect with anything say blah 5/10 winnier senario ~explained~ |
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