EXCLUSIVE .....Jay286 TitoBronsky Enygma and TonySelf..."WHEN I COME AROUND"
 

When i come around ......track was thought up a while ago but islept on it kids was buggin me to finish so sorry for the wait to all who put forth hard work and quality shit here check this one out

12 bars jay 4 bars tony
12 bars tito 4 bars tony
12 bars enygma 4 bars tony

with special thanks to jay 286 for the hook idea

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233177
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233140

Been a long time and coming... lol

Glad to see the completed version... SHIT IS GONNA BUMPPPP IN THE WHIP......

BASS Crazy and them 4 bars into the hook is slick kiko

Good execution all around yall :)


OYD BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



-Don Tito Bronsky

beat i kinda like it idk though
idk not really feeling jays verse lyrics were cool but his flow in the beggining bugged me to be honest delivery was cool
tonys first 4 were cool
tito pretty cool flow idk parts of ur verse i wasnt really feeling which is wierd cause ive never disliked anything youve done with the exception of the talkin bout the flow track
enygma i either love your verse or hate it i havent decided yet lol i like ur flow in parts but in some it sounds wierd delivery voice was cool lyrics cool
tito like u and the faster flow def sounds nice with your deep voice and delivery

hook i liked it but i think if the when i come around part was said a little quicker it would sound alot better

overall idk something i might dl but def not my fav from any of you with the exception of tonys last 4

beat is cool...

um jay..i like ur voice its got humor in it..nice verse just that flow mayne i have heard u rip a mic off with a better flow!

tony...seems like u rushed ur bars...anyways yeah u followed the steps of who preceeded you and that was smart..cos i think that helped give u a nice flow and not to seem too tis and too that feel me?...

tito...i wasnt feeling you flow at all...u were like hoping off the beat..i mean u gd u just seemed like it was ur first time on this but ima say ur lyrics were decent fo sho

enygma on the fast lane...yeah u tryed...i liked ur effort but ur flow was kinna slacking!it wud sound right and then fall off...but yeah u tryed i feel if u practice more on this style u'd be dope...



um hooks were cool yeah...like the split stuff...cos the vocal mixtures sounded right!


y'all keep it up...

hit my sig

Listen'n

Like the beat....good shit

1st: Jay nice delivery....like the presence lyrics dope 100%
Tony: Nice as usual...didnt like how u was only on back an fourth for 4bars
Tito: Flow was nice kid....different approach i like that...Lyrics as usual dope son
Enygma: Nice approach wit the fast type flow....but that aint u i heard better from u when u wasnt rappin like that...but lyrics was good thoug...i like that...100%

Over-all:
Aight Fellaz good shit i dont see nothin' wrong towards mixin' everybody sounded crisp an clear...good choice on the beat..like the concept keep doin what y'all do...my ratin 7/10 :thumbup:

no doubt:)

preciate the feed yall....

Beat is familiar

Jay..vocals a touch over processed...like ur voice on this track...fits well

flow/delivery/lyrics all acceptable to good


Tony...vocals at appropriate levels...if a touch loud....


Hook we slick...but, I didn't realize it was the hook until the middle of it...

Tito...like ur rhyming...well done...vocals sounds good



Enygma...vocals need better mixing...but the flow was nice


this was a decent track...jus lacked 2 things that would have made it better

1. Polish in the mixing
2. Tha Q



C-YA!


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Yup.....thanks for the feed everyone :thumbup:

Wow....I am the #1 Killer of all threads :(

yea boo enygma....booo you kill all the feed bro, change your name so people dont know its you, n we can get some feed...haha jp sending errrrrrrrrrrrrr up

Yeah man....this shit was dope :thumbup:

Had a pretty chill vibe to this. Real decent collab here, fellas. Nice track. I wouldn't mind working with you guys, just get ahold of me and let me know about BP3. Take care. lenduggan@gmail.com

I refuse to let this die after I post :mad:

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1st - nice quality, smooth flow decent like it

2nd - vocals a tad high but a cool flow and swagger but wtf @ 4 bars... ahh its original though i must say so props for workin with it

hook - damnn the 'when i come around' iis waayyy too high

3rd - solid, but nothing really stand out ya mean?

4th - ahh what the fuck with... the.. stopandgoflow yo... its...kinda...anoyyingasfuckintome honestly sorry not feeling it

If you worked out the few imperfections on the engineering/production this would be a pretty solid track

*unfinished business*