Mc:Xplicit vs Elusiv G
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-14-04 at 11:39 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:40 AM.
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Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:43 AM.
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This here is not a rap battle its more like a knowledge dual
Cause ima drop “so many lines” on this nigga you’ll think I sppittin in “college rule” I “eat” mcs “daily” lyrically as part of my “nutritional breakfast” G want drop a “metaphor” so lets put him on the spit a “punch line back fast” Half G’s raps trash… Me… going down in history so in the “future” what im sppitin is a “back flash” My rhymes will spark heat… That’ll take you “old school” “listening” to the “greatest” of your last “five heartbeats” I say the greatest cause the last is always the best Eternity on the flat line see if you can pass the test You judging my rhymes dawg that’s a weird event Cause you criticizing yourself seeing your rhymes in the mirror tint ~one Xplicit ~ |
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Mc:Xplicit hate do burst yo bubble, but u jus not wit it like cheddar bomb in 8mile u jus cant kick it// rhyming baffles u, like words to illeterates ur brain confused, like fathers to illegitimates//( out of wedlock babies) U think u got skillz, n rightz to say that ur ill Its a fact thats earned, not a sentence that can be sparadically spurned// "U remind me" of usher and his battle wit sisqo ( u reind me trak by usher) U seem scared to step up and battle ur foes!// 15-7, ur records impressive, i aint stressin' cos all ur votes were from fake aliases signed with fake e-mail addreses//( blap) Yo rhymes weak, phone "alicia" 4 u hit the "keys" ( keyboard and pun on a.keys) shed cud help u out and fix tha jelly in your knees// ur so fat ,u remind me of big pun girlz scared, cos cholesterol comes out every time u spunk// (lol..ejaculate) Ur rhymes remind me of fat people da way u screaming Its a similar sound, its like fat people breathing.//(lol) Like a wack ass programme i wanna change the channel Ur rhymes bore me, cos there wetter than a flannel// Mc:Xplicit, im stumped, cos ur rhymes fail to exhibit The skills u speak of in each and every spit// Self-glorifying nigga, yo rhymes bush shud prohibit Cos kindergarten kids c ur verses and easily rip it// I'm gonna "Xplicitly" lace u wit psychopathic profanity Leave stunned and robbed of yo vanity// Like in tha sims i seen a character whos strait up shit To erase u fool, all i gotta do is type and click// I cud hav won this battle from half way across tha globe I'm surprised u even posted, I'm surprised u even showed// Cos similar to Nas and Jay-z, ill drown u in "Ether" ( Nas finished Jay wit dis) Lite ur rhymes on fire, cos u cudnt get "respect" from Arethra// ( arethra franklin and her son r.e.s.p.e.c.t) |
hey yo i typed 15-7 cos i was lookin at big bad wolfs record a diff mc im battlin his record is 7-5 tha rhyme still works jus change that shit round y'all . Peace
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Voted For: Elusiv G
Aight, Elusiv, Ya Structre Was All....BLAH, Yea...Improve That!...But Other Then That Ya Had Som Nice Metas n Personals, I Think Ya Disses Hit Harderd, Just Improve Vocab n Maybe Up Ya Punches, Add Humour To Em MC Ya Verse Was Aight, Room 4 Improvement, Better Usage Of Words In My Opinnon, An Addin Humour...But Nice Structure n A Few Aight Metas In There, Nice Drop... Return The Favor Ya'll... P E A C E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin uppin uppin uppin..............................
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Voted For: Elusiv G
elusive wins this. both were about equal as far as punches go. elusive just had more. this infinite lines shit sucks cause it gives the second guy posting more of a chance to win, especially when competition is this close. i like the second guy's rhyme pattern and layout better. it seemed like you bit it from Jay-Z, but it would be pretty effective in a live battle. |
uppin for votes in here
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to dren..i cudnt c his verse..when i posted!!!!! hey yo uppin 4 votes
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uppin for dome votes man we need to get some votes drop a link and ill hit you back
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uppin............................................. ......and chek ma sig shop y'all, below is a lil taster of ma skillz
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yo uppin for votes dawg drop a link and ill get back to u with an honest vote
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