So Serious (feat. Fate)
 

yeh ... after i dropped this whit him... he took the instrumental... n his verse n changed things up n cut me out... put a whole commercial feel to it n i couldnt fux whit it again lol... but heres the original...

http://soundclick.com/unspokenvirtue - So Serious . Hes first... im 2nd.

replied to:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=220007&page=2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220489

Your using the same link twice- fix it by tommorow or ima lock this... pm me with a different link to have it unlocked if its not fixed in time.

dis beats hard...1st cat lyricz is coo flows aiight deliverys ok...2nd dude lyricz is str8 flows aiight deliverys coo...overall da tracks pretty solid 4 da most part...keep it up

Feed used 1/26/06 "twin eagles"

beat is ok
voice is cool
flow is good
lyrics played nothing creative
delivery is real layed back id liek to hear a little bit more energy pretty good though
2nd guy i hate ur voice flow is ok off in a few places lyrics are ok

post up another link ur first one is invalid

works fine for me...

lmfao @ hatin my voice... to each is own homeboy...

ok pm me with another link if you want this opened


Links received in a PM- Re-opened.- Sev.

... On the rise...

Aight

First person

Flows nice

Lyrics Are Koo

Deliverys Koo,Feelin Your Presence In This

Emotions Koo

Lmao@BRAAAHHH

Your Mic Seems To Go Quiet

2nd Dude:

Lyrics Are Better I Think

Flow Fall Off A Few Times

Deliverys Koo

Emotions Koo

Presence Is Nice,Seem Confident

Overall:
7/10

Keep Up!

Feed used 1/27/06 "Unfuckwidable"