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YouAndWhatArmy vs NoCkTerNuL
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16 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No Gayness 3-0 = Technical Knockout ^ that's coz chances are we'll be waiting 20 years for it to go the full distance, lol. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-16-09 at 09:41 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
YouAndWhatArmy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-09 09:41 AM.
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listen grasshopper i’m known to question shit, considered to be fussy like how’s it a hard knock life, when this nock is straight pussy ngga please, ya not rated good by guys expressin they thoughts if fuckin with nock is a bumpy ride, the destination’s genital warts plus, ya not sneaking this up against my mad fighting a dark horse? nah, that’s just ya mom under bad lighting even ya girl’s thought of as easy.. all naked, haggard and poor if she’s dressing, there’s a guy each side ready to sandwich the whore and ngga, you must be a joke even to ya local crew living ya life out of a fuckin beat box ghetto kids would spit vocals to you pumped with aggression, so take a drink.. I’m serious I’ll hook you up with a fanta twist, since you struggle for fans, period & now lets be real.. coz you know the truth of it queer the greats have torrents of punches, & you’ll be leeching off ‘em for years shit, if you think you’ll win this.. you really must be dense if it’s a costly journey to the top, I’m travelling at your expense and remember kids, its 2009… …so I’m so hot and michael jackson lines don’t cut it. |
NoCkTerNuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-09 04:03 PM.
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I know you’re an alias, you fake, what name you tryin to preserve?
like Red Eye Express this kid trying to pose as a HERB. (1) You battled before, I can tell, but your rhymes are wreckin Changin names runnin from your past like witness protection I read your posts everyone just wants to degrade you Then again you probly changed you name cuz everyone hates you So you want to be an herb, getting new names like loaners that’s what you want, I’ll “smoke this herb” call me a stoner I don’t know much about your past but I do know your fate I ask Tony about your rhymes he said “they’re GRRRRRRATE” (2) I’m like Nero you won’t want to cross my path (3) 3 votes for me none for you, percentage? I’ll do the math lemme break it down I get all the votes and you get none what’s left from my 100% that you’re getting son? (4) I declare war… you ask me “you and what army?” I’ll do you in like king… …solo, 3-0 you won’t harm me (5) (1) Red Eye Express is a UK marijuana magazine (or so I’ve heard) (2) Tony the Tiger; Grate: noun- a harsh rasping sound (3) Emperor Nero of Rome used to burn people on crosses to light the paths of his Gardens. (4) 80% of the planets population = HAPPY because they have visited the basement. (5) King solo KO’d him, he asks me and what army... i do it solo |
dang it... number 4 was supposed to be a quote... 80%-10%... ehhh! good battle man... alright let's get some votes!!
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This was feedback posted for NoCkTerNuL
King Solo is Youandwhatarmy....dumb ass .
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are you serious!? damn it! read that wrong battle wrong... oh well. Why didn't you just vote and say that?
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Yeah dude, I was in that league as two names.. got matched against myself. I only battle on the YouAndWhatArmy account now because for some reason battling has been disabled on this account. Good shit though.
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LOL! that's funny... dang I guess my question was answered. yea when i saw that battle i was like, this dude isn't new. who is he? haha. alright let's get some votes!
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Wait so is TKO first to 3 or it has to be 3-0? cuz that's the rule already right? they should change it to first to 3. everyone's battle is stuck at like 1-3.
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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL
VERY close battle but he won this battle with better punches and and personal YAWA was good too, one of the better starters on this site but still needs to work on some things big upz to both V/NOK Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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- A technical knockout rule only applies to a 3-0 outcome. If a battle is at 2-1 and then hits 3-1, it stays open until someone gets 5 votes... or until it goes through 21 days of an inactive period. If that happens, you can get it closed by an administrator. |
Voted For: YouAndWhatArmy
Flow: tie Multis: didn't see none Punches: army Meta's: army Concepts: army Opener: knock Closure: army Personal: knock Enjoyment: army Overal: army To much to do on my g1 phone so I broke it down like this I will brake it down more if need it. Knock. You had some good bars and then you had some super weak bars such as you ask tony about he's rhymes and he said therrr ggggggrrrrrrate WTF? So you gave him a complament? That was just weak as hell and some concept could of been better if you fix your wording but this bar I thought was good was the witness protection bar and your last bar but you need more then that to win in this case. Army Better all around verse with better punches look more focus and connect better with fresher concept and delievery some parts of your verse did slack but all around pretty good. Vote army |
People need to learn how to vote... Murdah, it wasn't a compliment, or i would have spelled it g-r-e-a-t. I spelled it g-r-a-t-e look it up man, it's a word. or better yet read the explanations that i put up there so you don't even have to go look it up. UPPIN.
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