LFS (6) vs Ghostface (3)
 

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Voting:
Must post THREE links of you voting into your check in, or its minus ONE vote for each missing link. If you want to win, then vote or you will most likely lose.

Goodluck.

check. i'm gonna just drop my verse tonight/tommorow early lol. 10 lines.

check thats kool

i'm only droppin these 10 lines so i don't no-show,
got 15 minutes so all you voters can expect this to be so-so,
see what i mean, but whatev here comes some predictable filler,
i'ma beast on this lame dude, call me a ghostface killer,
i'm betting you can tell that my heart just ain't in it this week,
tryna equalize my life right now, this little dude is just me eq(meek),
what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,
i apologize to all my boys who wanted me to come out hard,
so lay or kirk or whoever, hit me back up when the playoffs start...

bullshit i threw together to not get dq'd again. lol sorry the last few weeks have been shit, got a lot of stuff goin down.i'll probably be signin out for about a week, maybe 2.

yo i need an extension

Extension granted, verse due Saturday by Midnight.

ok ok 1st off im tryin of yall using that same ghostfase killer line
its gettin old and jus by readin ur shit i can tell ive already wasted my time
you came with no heat and thats why this battle will be easily captured
my punches will leave this bitch deeply enraptured
now u went and brought the bitches into the rap that was a little uncalled 4
only thing i wonderin is where you get ur bitches from ur corner store
you came weak this time dog i actually heard you were pretty descent
but like your girls ur knees got weak so you switched your style up now ur bent
id really like 2 battle u again sometime when you can actually write something descent
this rap isnt even worth 4 any1 2 add their 2 cents!

srry jus finished my comp monitor at my house blew and my shit waz saved on there so i had 2 make a new rap

what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,

vs

nothing.


Veryy weak battle, LFS you didn't even have any good concepts..if you realize its an easy concepts its most likely played..but atleast you had an barelly okay line...which is mehish but in this battle it was the best bar. Sadly, but Ghost..ya need some work..your rhyme scheme was basic..your not really usin punches..kinda like statements.. the initial set up for a punch is..


Set up line..bla bla bla bla
state a concept, .. - flip it.

what you do is..

bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla..

v/ LFS ..ya'll need to step it up..See ya in a few weeks LFS

i'm only droppin these 10 lines so i don't no-show,
got 15 minutes so all you voters can expect this to be so-so,
see what i mean, but whatev here comes some predictable filler,
i'ma beast on this lame dude, call me a ghostface killer,
i'm betting you can tell that my heart just ain't in it this week,
tryna equalize my life right now, this little dude is just me eq(meek),
what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,
i apologize to all my boys who wanted me to come out hard,
so lay or kirk or whoever, hit me back up when the playoffs start...

(this verse was mainly a self prop and had some lines when you actually dissed yourself. I know you stated you didn’t have much free time to drop the verse, but you should work on you creativity a little more)


verses
ok ok 1st off im tryin of yall using that same ghostfase killer line
its gettin old and jus by readin ur shit i can tell ive already wasted my time
you came with no heat and thats why this battle will be easily captured
my punches will leave this bitch deeply enraptured
now u went and brought the bitches into the rap that was a little uncalled 4
only thing i wonderin is where you get ur bitches from ur corner store
you came weak this time dog i actually heard you were pretty descent
but like your girls ur knees got weak so you switched your style up now ur bent
id really like 2 battle u again sometime when you can actually write something descent
this rap isnt even worth 4 any1 2 add their 2 cents!

(you need to work on the content of your verse. You had a lot of basic stuff, but the creativity is really missing out of your verse)/



Vote – LFS, for having a verse that had better content and forming slight better punches

wow how am i winning this? oh well i'm poofing again for a few weeks. be back for playoffs.

v/LFS... honestly, all ghost needed to do was throw one, fairly decent, actually all it really had to be was a diss towards LFS... it never happened though, and LFS had one line

what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,

that was the best bar, holy fuck shit.

I have to agree with Kesse. Nothing worth quoting at all. But LFS just sucked less than Ghostface did. Ghostface, you need to work on everything, big time. LFS, you need to actually try, you fucker.

V/LFS.

So look, I was going to drop a breakdown vote like I always do. Shit though, I read through both verses and I ain't even going to waste my fucking time. I don't know either of these guys, but this battle was absolute trash. I hope that neither dropped to their fullest because if they did they should sign out because, WOW, and I mean that truly. There wasn't a single punch in either verse, just a bunch of statements and irrelevant ramblings that have no place in a text battle. I will say that LFS probably had the better of the two so-called "verses" so I will give this one to him. Both of you need to bring something next time though, I hate voting on garbage.

v/ - LFS, step it up though bro.

LFS wins 5 - 0

LFS (9) and Ghostface (2)