Theory vs Drakel
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Feeding of any kind
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

word, gl.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-17-05 at 11:34 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 10:53 AM.

Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 11:00 AM.

His alias is Veyetal (vital.) Also peep his avatar

Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass
But fuck dragon characteristics, my punches got ya duckin back
& I aint referin to forked tongues when I say hiss lines are fuckin wack
The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR
Straight bashin this faggot dude, i'll toss the whore
Cuz I aint referin to ya avatar
...when i'm dragon you across the floor
Fuck drake, if someones gettin owned, you can bet it's him
But I guess i'll take a veyetal loss, as long as I get the win

he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst
you're not at all clever, and far from being witty
shit, your stuff is more bazaar than middle east cities
see, i know you're a fruit, damn, your stuff never varies
and you're in a jam now, cause you're about to be berried
shit, you world's coming down, there aint nobody feeling
and the only secure hold you have on things in your hands on the ceiling
you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch
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eh, time to eat an orange

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooo

i love boobs, and thats all ha matters............

Your just all like "I'm a big man, I like big boobs, i'm gonna go piss on something" :wtf:

yeah man, shit, they cushion my hands.....and daubs has a crush on tizzle cause it looks like his cousin

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

This battle was pretty good..

Pretty close and shit..

I just want to check the polls.

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

good verse man, i think u honestly got it.....pollz fom

Voted For: Drakel

ok..i'm doing it this way.....so..

Theory
1st Bar-good...but u forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line.5/10
2nd bar-Forced...hiss is not pronounced like his.Hiss stresses the "s" in it...while his doesn't.His sounds more liked "hiz".4/10
3rd Bar-Nice rip wit the Dr-akel shit..but dickridin is played.And the 1st line....fake personal.Drakel neva cheated or nutin..so..4/10
4th bar-Forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line again.Nice wordplay in punch tho.6/10
5th bar-Didn't like this...was flat out weak.3/10

Ok..you had forced wordplay(hiss/his),played shit(dickridin),And forced rhyming on numerous occasions.Not a specacular verse...but decent.

Drakel
1st bar-Decent punch wit the german thingy.6/10
2nd bar-Lmao..I liked this one,Never seen it done before...so good creativity.7/10
3rd bar-Good wordplay wit the jam/berry thing...nice job.6/10
4th bar-Didn't like this one,honestly -_-..4/10
5th bar-Even worse than the other one...that wretch part,aside from rhymin purposes,seemed pointless.3/10

Ok...ur 1st 3 bars were dope.I liked them.Only problem were the last 2...just flat out weak.

But in my opinion...Drakel got it.
Theory had too many problems with his verse...

Vote-Drakel.
RTF........

^^ Biiiiiiiiicth Vote............................. :thumbup:

You kept telling me how you were rusty, you came better then I expected cuz of that, ha, nice battle though hoe, g/l

but uh, ya, upping again..........................