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Zone Out 10-28-06 01:58 AM

A P E X X vs Zone Out
 
Battle Rules:
3-4 MINUTES
Due thursday

Minimum posts to vote: 1500

Check in by: 10-31-06 at 12:58 AM

Must drop verse in 7290 minutes after check in.

System 10-28-06 02:01 AM

A P E X X has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-06 02:01 AM.

System 10-28-06 02:18 AM

Zone Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-06 02:18 AM.

Zone Out 11-01-06 10:30 AM

Gaypexx

peep his profile for anything yall dont get

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∆ P E X X 11-01-06 05:37 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4616910

PrahJect 11-01-06 06:09 PM

Voted For: A P E X X

Aight listenin to Apexx first off on it....im koo with yall so it gon be hard....

listenin..Apexx..

"Mr Potato rap edition"
"Only Black kid up in school"
"Born Garbage Like brenda's Baby"
"you ass, maybe u shud sell that"

MAN HOLD UP WITH THE PUNCHES NIGGA LOL DAMN..

im not gon quote anymore gon hurt my hand lol

Flow is sick on this, this is how u gotta do a battle track the delivery is dope, multis are hot, nothing off atall...lyrics are off tha hizzang man...zone u my man but this shit is dope...apexx u killed this...haa at the bird poo line...yeah man presence is sick...ima have to say...

9.8/10 battle verse..zone u nice but I think apexx got u i aint heard yours yet but let's check it...

Aight Zone-Out...

like the beat choice...had that juelz flow at the begining, beat is kinda goin over u but the punches are pretty hot..deep blue line is nice..kiss ya ass g/bye is nice...u comin nice...but the beat is overriding u a lil bit...second beat...better volume...multis are pretty nice..flow is on but gets off some times....adlibs a lil loud..ya battle shit was nice zone but it wasnt as polished as apexx nah mean..ima go with apexx on this..ima give u 7.8/10...i liked ya style itd beat other cats on here but apexx had this easy to me...no beef..holla

.Ike. 11-01-06 06:16 PM

Voted For: A P E X X

ok listening to apexx's..

like the beat of course.....damn..i like the A to Z line...some nice personals in here...ohio, cheeks....brendas baby line is nice....lisp line is nice..lmao @ the ad lib....down with the syndrome is pretty nice........inbetween was some coo punches..nothing that stood out like whoa or nothing inbetween those.....lmao @ 0 G..i like that..nice........wasnt feelin the puffy..or bird shit line...ive heard em before lots...so ehh..think u couldnt came a lil nicer with that....feelin the closer....nice way to end it......overall pretty dope....zones gonna have to come pretty hard.......this was nice and consistent..with quite a few punches that REALLY stood out from the others....nice job..



listening to Zone now....

ehh i dunno if i like the beat too much...opener was ok..but i dont think it hit like intended....on the first beat nothing really stood out too much to me.....beat switch...ehh the gaypexx thing is kinda old...some decent personals here...lacoste shirt.....brainstorm line is pretty nice.....budden album line is coo.....aright...this diss was coo...but there wasnt really any lines that made me go "damn" or nothing that really just stood out tons from the rest of it....it was pretty consistent...but just nothing that threw it over the top if u know what i mean...



so overall..ima have to give this to apexx...just cause there were more punchlines in his that stood out....those 9 or 10 really nice punches just gave him the edge...as far as the rest...yall were both consistent...but apexx just had some lines that were the better ones in the battle......

yall know i like yall both...and im coo with yall both...but im honest...and i feel like apexx edged zone on this one......


vote: apexx

TonyTone 11-01-06 06:28 PM

This was feedback posted for A P E X X
 
Zone Out

"but fuck breakin, i'll use ya face as a speed bump"
"ima cannon u a small gat.....this lil nigga betta fall back"
"that'll leave u flat quicker than a hd screen"
"make u sound like mike tyson b4 a fight u wanna eat my babies"
and the bathin ape line

apexx

"u should beat ur feet like bitches when they beat ya face"
"apexx for zoneout, i'll smack u from a to z"
"my chain hang low like the cheeks on this bitch face"
"who gone pay u to hear u speak wit a lisp"
"he down wit the syndrome"
"you wanna be me but u broke stupid n wack, 3 strikes"
"dog ya lips look like u was chewin on some bees"

sorry just felt like quotin some lines......

well im feelin zone out's swagga a bit more than apexx. both yal got a sick flow, but i like apexx's beat choice more but that gots nothin to do with my vote, just sayin. apexxs voice souds raw as fuck on that beat tho n his punches were more creative n shit n just hit harder especially since they were true. zone really does got a bit of a lisp n some jay z lips lol but yea, he just got more personal wit his shit. gotta give this one to apexx

TonyTone 11-01-06 06:29 PM

fuckin A, i can't even vote =/ .

Yvonne 11-01-06 06:37 PM

Voted For: A P E X X

damn both actually ripped this..i had to listen like 3times each!

idk how to drop an acceptabe vote but ima try my best...

umm

Beat : i liked zone's beat switch..cool idea but i honestly prefered apexx's


Flows : both flowed well,but i think apexx took this cos he seemed more consistant/confident with his flows..zone was steady too but kinna slipped off at some spots


lyrics/Punches : zone had TIGHT ones,but apexx had harder ones,his wordplays were more entertaining,irony and stuff were pretty cool...every bar seemed loaded with harder and harder punches..rhyme scheme was pretty cool,imo better than zone's...


presence : damn apexx took this cos he got a deepvoice and he made gd use of it...it seemed like he over shadowed zone with this cos zone dosent have a deep voice and didnt seem to have put that 'hardness' in his spitting...

i guess thats all...

props to zone tho...u were tight but some1 has to take the win!

BigTony.Self 11-01-06 06:41 PM

Voted For: A P E X X

aight my vote goes to apexx just more polished zone caem alot better than expected and ionno what kids was saying cuz ya beat choices was doin it ida rocked em easy..but pexx had more of the complete package and took this shit overall the shit was hittin a bit harder from apexx side some things you was sayin zone wasn t hearin ya volume could be upped a bit u seemed to get drowned out a bit from the beat all in all best battle the site seen in a bit good shit yall

Diet Coke 11-01-06 07:24 PM

This was feedback posted for A P E X X
 
Checkin' them polls..

:high::high::high::high::high:

Ysdat 11-01-06 07:24 PM

This was feedback posted for A P E X X
 
one sided .

Paranoid 11-01-06 07:38 PM

Voted For: A P E X X

Apexx
Your beat choice was cool, I thought you woulda switched it up for me I got sick of it. But you stayed hot with the punchlines, you came pretty hot and stayed consistant. Your flow was deadly and your delivery sounded on lock and you had it serious. Your verse was just a lot more complex and a plus for your quality being better too. nice job pexx

Zone Out
I don't like your quality man, makes ya voice sound depressed idk. Your beat choices were good and ya flow was good. You just weren't consistant with the punchlines as well. You keep talkin and hardly rap, your verse was still good, you got better throughout it. You remind to much of lil wayne with ya voice and the way you pronounce shit. I just aint feelin ya verse as much dude. nice job though man.


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