okay, heres what i think.
First off, i like that accent of yours but i think your problem was not only audio quality(wich isn't your fault) but you were sorta doing this thing where u was been all quite and rapping a bit monotone, it all rhymes and shit wich is good but your flow needs to improve...get angry or emotional or something i dunno.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ausbloodfistmusic.htm

first shit i made....check it out. leave some feed.

^^^ not the place for songs buddy

thanks 4 feed man check my faded freestyle in songs i was a lil more comfortable on da mic bcos of the lick probs lol altho its not as smooth as the one u left fbak on :thumbup:

:evilgrin: yes, i discovered the songs thread after this. my deepest apoligies a grade. :banghead:

here's just 2 quick free's, was bored, and u might be able to tell that the creative juices werent flowin lol......

check quik freestyle 1 and quik freestyle 2

http://www.soundclick.com/blahh

hit the sig shutdown freestyle;)

^ ill ish for a free mayne good lyrical content

alright...

check it!!!

my text-dio cypher..

kick frees
in trees
bitch please
lick and sneeze... eat me!!!!

EAT JUNK, YOU SKUNK

www.soundclick.com/realskills - bored freestyle