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yo man, your dubs were fucking off like crazy, your mic isnt that good so its hard to hear you man, you got really bad quality, is that a mic built into a lap top? either way try to synchronise your dubs with your vocals and it'll sound a lot better, also the chorus was weeaaaaaaak sauuceee broski, and find your own style cuz you're sounding a lil too much like cassidy

i feel u...i just fix that problem.. and change the link ..but soundin like cass i mean its cass song so i went in it like cass...........anymore feedback..that actually tells me if they like it or not

can i get more feedback

true just make sure you don't sound like that on every track, and either way even if you do someone elses song just use your own style that way you make it seem like you're taking over that shit with your own swagg.

The chorus is still ugly, you better off doing it in your own voice man, and yea the dubs are waaaaaaaay better now and I can actually understand what you're saying most of the time, nice rhyme scheme and multi's man, you still gotta work on your flow a bit though cuz it's choppy and once you elevate that you'll be good to go and you can invest in better audio equipment

thanx 4 the feedback i appreciate your critique pros and cons .its feedback like this that can help me get better

alright i feel u..anymore feedback