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Meta.Phor.T.Cal 03-18-06 08:48 PM

WordPlayer - Just Rhyming
 
Not Ur Average...I'm Sick Sick Sick..


*cough*


Hit U Wit 666, Im Tha Demon Handin Out A Fix, Dont Get Caugh In Da Mix
Leave U Toothless As Hickz, Roothless Onna Bitch, Postin Ya Autopsy Pix
Now U 'Bared-Naked' Like Porno Tricks, Fuckin Wit Me Iz Lyke 2 Dicks
U'll End Up ''Da Ass Hole'' And Wonderin How U Got Caught Up In Dis Shyt
Im Syck Az A 'rape-Skit' Force Intercorse On Yo Whore & Tape~It
Show It Across Da World, When U Havent Even See Yo Gurl Butt-Naked
My Death - Ill Fake It, Do All Y'all A Favior, Call Me Yuh Saviour
Im Bitch Slappin Booty Emceez Lyke They Momma 4 Bad Behaviour
Rapz Prayer, Answer 2 God On Da Mic...Ridin Hard Lyke Tha Town Byke
I Stay Attracted 2 Pussy, Datz Why Ur 6 Feet Down - Dyke
Ha Ha, Fuckin Wit Rah U Mus Be Murderin Ink Lyke Ja
And If U Aint, Then Sorry But Ur Gonna Get Alot Of Ha Ha'z
Cuz I Step 2 It And Inject Body Fluid,Spittin Like Im Cleanin Shoez
Am Leanin-To, Highbeamin Thru, Rockz Shine Lyke Da Screenings Blue
Watz Da Meanin Of U? I Find No Point Lyke A 'Broken Steeple'
My Rhymez So Tight They Thread A Needle, Dilute Yuh People
Now Ur 'Poppin Ear Drumz' Til A Tear Comes, U Fear Gunz
When U Rap, Itz Like Azz Clap, Cuz Im Only 'Hearin-bBumz'
Im Steerin Crumbz Out Of Ur Direction, The Whole Cookiez Mine
U Must Be Out Yo Mind Thinkin U Hurtin Wit Those Rookie-Rhymez
Im Tuckin-Ninez, Streetz Of CA Where We Play That Gun Spray
U Can Say Im So Sick Ill Even Fuck U Up When Ur Dead Lyke Ted Bundy

Payn 03-18-06 09:20 PM

damn playa diz shit here is sicc .....very nice wordplay, multis, vocab was on point like usual & creative as fucc keep droppin dem bombs on dem exposed azz cheek rappers

also don't forget 2 leave a link so dey won't close up ya joint here

Bonafide 03-18-06 09:29 PM

Damn man thats crazy, i havent seen anything from u in a minute. But it seems like u back, i caught up with u in the cypher droppin some quick stuff there. But back to this, it was nice all the way thru, the only problem i had with it was that the lines were too long. I like to keep 'em short. But thats just me, good drop man, get at me for a collab on a later day aight man. Peace.

Dirty Nigga 03-19-06 03:17 PM

Saw the link in your free agent thread, you got some pretty decent rhymes, you got a way with multies...

offer still stands, come to still sick...

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 03-19-06 05:12 PM

Thanx Fo Da Feed

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 03-20-06 11:25 AM

Hey Yo Bonafide I'll Collab Wit'cja Homey

CORY DA REALIST 03-21-06 10:32 AM

damn ni66a did u burn ya hands typin dis shit up dis shit was HOTT HOTT HOTT keep it up ey b sure 2 leave me sum feed keep doin u nice multies

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 03-22-06 08:22 PM

Yo Thanx Fo Da Feed, Uppity..

Daubs 03-29-06 05:17 PM

Only bad thing is I aint feeling your structure, you got some pretty decent concepts and your multis are nice, thats your strong point definately.

Keep writing and switch your style while still using multis and youll be sick in no time.

Stay up.


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