Daubs vs (X)eed
 

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Check in by: 07-17-05 at 06:08 AM

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(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 05:40 AM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 05:41 AM.

Like old rusty saws, this bitch just cannot manage to hack-it..
And if eed aint a cheater, whys he pre-checked the brackets!!
Ya punches wouldnt be powerful if they were delivered in tanks..
And your loyal to the game,..no wonder your (X)eed'in ya banks!!
You miss out on all the fun, kinda like a muslim at christmas..
And like dealers going ape.....you nothin but monkey business!!
Your teeth are already fucked so dont ask for more toffee..
And its like you throw matches.......at clothes..................
.........................the way you burn a hole in your pocket!!

Meh, should be enough.

Explinations if needed:

1 x = checked
2 read his sig and game/banks and exeeding river banks.
3 simple worplay
4 you should get it

Dont get anything, pm me or do not vote!!

Hes finally found something similar between Bush and Him
his verses are held {captive} like Dunsten Checks in
chances of winnin is quite slim like a person skatin on thin ice
he follows.......... his own feet, as if Big Foot were to recite
the mans playin himself, waitin for someone to "cum"
even if he got a "wet willy"he wouldnt "blow" any stunts
the chimps in "splits" found Tony blairs now on his knees
he be going "bananas" like Daubs wuz hangin from trees

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aiight ... xplanations
dunsten cheks in is amovie bout ...... a monkey ... hus i held captive... and yer... u shud get that

you ppl should get the big foot adn follow his feet line
and now tony blairs ..on his knees ... and has got allied wit bush ..4 help... and yer... u shud get taht tooo
dnt understand dnt FUCKIN VOTE

Nice, good luck .

Awww Almost 4got.... The Whole Monkey Thin Wuz..cuz Hes Got An Ape In His Avatar.//// So Anywayz..uppn

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Voted For: Daubs

Ya punches wouldnt be powerful if they were delivered in tanks..
And your loyal to the game,..no wonder your (X)eed'in ya banks!!
You miss out on all the fun, kinda like a muslim at christmas..
And like dealers going ape.....you nothin but monkey business!!

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the chimps in "splits" found Tony blairs now on his knees
he be going "bananas" like Daubs wuz hangin from trees

daubs was more witty and creative his wordplay was better and wasnt forced..his punches hit harder than xceeds...hence more quotables...xceed had some good concepts but just couldnt word them right, or deliver the punch

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

EZ fam..........dont win den niggas D/r keep it bangin folk..........

Voted For: Daubs

open: Daubs.....way better opener just mad emore sense and connected.....X.....didnt really flow good......
close: Aight....by both really a tie here.....both were kinda good closers......
personals: Daubs at least mention his name in the verse and had better personals wt that.....X.....didnt need to though......
metas: Both had metas and really another tie here as well.....cant decide which ones better...onb this.....
punches: Daubs....jsut better punches cuz of delivery to them X need to work on ya delivery......but daubs props on the punches......
wordplay:....Really none here didnt see that much wordplay here ......

win: Daubs......cuz just a better verse had way good punches that packed alot pof damage and connected and a good opener.......there.....X need to work on ur delivery to punches just keep practicin and elevate aight myv/ daubs.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198196

RTF^^..........OVGR

Il hit that up later mate.

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