SLUGGA (vs) The~Star
 

Let's Go

YOU NO COMP SO WHY TEMPT ME
CAUSE YOU NOT A RAPPER YOU FONZWORTH BENTLEY/
AND YOU GOT ME WASTING BARS,
I'LL LEAVE YOUR GIRL SKIRT STICKY LIKE SHE USED TO MUCH STARCH/
EVERY ONE KNOWS WHO DA TRU STARS IS, (SLUGGA)
YOU BET ME IS TRU NON SENSE/
NOW LETS GET HONEST
YOU WANT WIN AN DATS A PROMISE/
I SHOULDNT OF WENT FIRST CAUSE NOW YOU SCARED,
AND YOU ATRU STAR NO NO NO :nono: LIKE JAE MILLZ SAID/

Are you serious?
 

WTF?I thought you was gon be better than that.Go easy, KO calling…..

Ask me if I’m scared when ya verse equals trash
It stinks more than the shit that comes out ya ass
Thought you some competition, but I was fooled
Rapping obviously ain’t ya thang, so stay in school
Never step to me acting like you got true skill
Now you getting cooked on my BQ grill
Name ya-self Slugga when you too weak to swing a bat
I’m leaving you upside down as if you was a bat
The moral for you to learn, don’t fuck with the Star
I’m dropping everything in site, guess you can call me Sars

That was a weak drop,but look at the verse I was battling.....

Oh and.....
 

One Of Da Best Battles
 

Uppin 4 Votes
Guarnteed
To Return Da Favor
So Lets Vote

SLUGGA
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...dont type in all caps either...it looks retarded...structure wasnt very good...lines were very unorganized...flow fell off...no good metas...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

*The~Star*
structure is good...flow is on lock...u had some nice metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...*The~Star* had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...more, and better metas...as well as wordplay...*The~Star* also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...*The~Star* gets my vote...

VOTE - *THE~STAR*

SLUGGA

YOU NO COMP SO WHY TEMPT ME
CAUSE YOU NOT A RAPPER YOU FONZWORTH BENTLEY/
->>flow doesnt work

AND YOU GOT ME WASTING BARS,
I'LL LEAVE YOUR GIRL SKIRT STICKY LIKE SHE USED TO MUCH STARCH/
->>weak

EVERY ONE KNOWS WHO DA TRU STARS IS, (SLUGGA)
YOU BET ME IS TRU NON SENSE/
->>doesnt really rhyme and too short

NOW LETS GET HONEST
YOU WANT WIN AN DATS A PROMISE/
->>decent

I SHOULDNT OF WENT FIRST CAUSE NOW YOU SCARED,
AND YOU ATRU STAR NO NO NO LIKE JAE MILLZ SAID/
->>ok closer this was your best line


*The~Star*

Ask me if I’m scared when ya verse equals trash
It stinks more than the shit that comes out ya ass
->>weak second line

Thought you some competition, but I was fooled
Rapping obviously ain’t ya thang, so stay in school
->>ok punch

Never step to me acting like you got true skill
Now you getting cooked on my BQ grill
->>decent

Name ya-self Slugga when you too weak to swing a bat
I’m leaving you upside down as if you was a bat
->>pretty good

The moral for you to learn, don’t fuck with the Star
I’m dropping everything in site, guess you can call me Sars
->>good closer

Star you took this...slugga your bar lengths were all over the place and nothing you said hit that hard. The star didnt come too hard but she didnt have to

v/ The Star

\/Dont sleep\/

U P P I N

aight the star takes this ...both verses kinda basic.
but the last 4 lines from star were the best and took him dis battle

vote-star

RETURN THA FAVOUR PLZ..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136222

U P P I N

Star took this easy. Like she said, this finna be a KO. Sluggas shit was boring. Nothin unoriginal in there. Star took this with harder punches, and a good structure to follow. Good metas too.

Vote-Star

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031

U P P I N

Hmm i cant vote officially but i can put my two cents in...Slugga..everything was whack kid..star took this but one line just made you look like a fuckin retard star

Name ya-self Slugga when you too weak to swing a bat
I’m leaving you upside down as if you was a bat

and the way you got you're name setup looks like a fuckin chick

yo vote:star

because...
i think she has hella skillz for a gurl man
slugga has skill but foreal star is one of the best femcees on here
she had better flow and vocab

so my vote goes to the star

yo return the favor

deiliquint vs. NovaKane

whoops my bad star...slugga said somin bout ya girls skirt so i thought you was a guy...mad props for representin the ladies..killa verse