Here comes tha critic shit again...
 

Look, Im not here to impress whack mc's Im
only hear to rip till ya fall to ya knees//
Try goin against sum1 like 2 pac and get off my cock
Unless u want my glock to have u bitches on lock//
I'll make most of u bitches turn Ashanti and sing
or just rip ur ass up like it aint no thing//
U say that tha shit i wrote suck but i used
that "whack shit" to make ur bitch wanna fuck//
I may not be a veteran but I'll tell ur ass off, beat
ur ass so fuckin bad it'll make yo lights turn off//
I bring the extreme like the "House of Pain" but pack
a "Desert Storm" wit me like Im "Paul Cain"//
I make niggaz wanna stay "Focus" cause I
come and attack brutally like da "White Locust"//
But wit this shit Ima rip ya ass until they say "Finish Him"
And I aint even here to entertain none of em//
So holla at a real nigga dats lookin for drugs dats
gangsta to fill any of ya niggaz wit slugs//
Niggaz look at me like Im dat nigga "D-Mob"
and say that Ima "Bad Boy" like "Black Rob"//
IF u wanna sick ass psychopathic schizophrenic
motherfucker, then stop bein a titty sucker//
And hire this fuckin free agent that'll rip
a nigga and make him enter a beauty pageant//


Aight Bash and Skiddz get on this shit... I know u will...
If u didnt know, if i wanted to write serious, i would but
im not takin this too seriously cause its not worth it unless
i was gettin paid... plus the more u get on me, tha more u
influence me so keep whachu gotta say comin

Cmon ppl... just tell me how much i gotta improve and elevate... im waitin for it...

it's was good to me , but what the hell do i know, keep it up

thanx man ay keep ya practice up like i was all day and u'll be better than me lol

I need sum critics over here. Still waitin for em.

hey baby! i thought it was off the hook! i loved it man! keep it up fa sho!

Thanx sexy... we gonna hook up lata and I'll spit sum more game... :-D... but till then more critics

Still waitin for more critics

yo my refered man.. haha, it was tight fo newbie to this shit... ya still could elevate some
try usin some tight vocab n shit... try relatin to shit

^Word.

thanx, my nigga. U always dere for me and shit helpin me out. Thanx for dat 2. Still waitin for more. Waitin for Bash and Skiddz to say sum shit

lmao......that was seriously wack.......boy where ur skillz at........did that even have any topic to it..........flow was off.......vocab was weak...........concept was wack.......it was just basically u sayin "dont fuck with me cuse i am gangsta"........u need major elevation

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60416

hit my shit up

Cmon quit hatin nigga. lol its cool though. Still lookin for critics

exactly...