1st Freestyle,soo hot.
 

itz the take over/
nigga tha breaks ova/
i flow so long u can turn ur tapes ova/
halo soldier u dont want it wit rich, so u betta pump ya breaks/
before u get punched in your face/
wit heat like the projects tha watch is froze/
and there's four burners on me like the top of tha stove/
plus my pockets is swole/
im bout to throw rocks in my lobe/
niggas will bet on your life and pocket your soul/
your like a calendar, your days are numbered/
if i drop and niggas fall then the wait is december/
i done cut off niggas heads and left 2 basterds outlined/
how u floss when you copt your trash from outside/
niggas is hatin on me because they wack/
make like a lazyboy, recline and fall back/

gimme some feedback

shit was hot fam..........

nice opening and closing..consistent flo...u got potential for tha future and present..good structure too..i can hear u spittin that out loud

thanx everybody, keep all your stuff comin too.

better than i can do...so its tight hah

shit was hot keep doin yo thing and who knowz

Luvin tha wordplay....Hating the structure.