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technique 09-11-07 08:13 PM

expectation
 
Yo u got the world, its ur time to do everything u can
be the man u gotta do everything to be the one to stand
u got your words use them to your own advantage
if people are hurting you use em to cause damage
cuz u was put here for a reason to show who u are
if u dont like me or wotever get a lyrical scar
compared to me ur mimical my words harder den physical
dont worry wot's ahead of me dont care if u redicual
ur just giving me fuel to burn you and set ur ass ablaze
you'll be amazed wot i say you'll be standing daized
When times are hard u gotta push urself to be better
remember never surrender people are just feathers
to me ur a flea lost out sea I piss on to much
dat ur sick to death from me cuz u suck
but like i give a fuck i dont never will cuz u lack skill
wanna be as dope as me you need to act real
i smoke u up like joints ur raps got no point
so i twist mc's joints quicker den flipping coins
im ripping im bad for u listening to me is bad for ur health
so absort the words in u and dey'll make u go hang urself

wiley d 09-12-07 12:03 PM

i think it was ok it wasnt perfect but the message was good leave feed on mine

trying to innovate myself-doing me

Brydon 09-13-07 04:07 PM

not bad at all man! much better then the rest uv written peace.

10-11-07 12:49 PM

You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.

10-14-07 06:22 AM

Closed, Moved And Stored.


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