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Valiant 05-14-05 04:09 PM

-->Loaded<--(Reloaded Pt.3)
 
I gain to grand with each turn I rhyme/
Tha faggot's choke with each word I time/
Yall bustas out there deserve to fry/
Cuz I aint takin shit from tha wanksta kind/
I'll drop you in limbo/
stalk you in congo/
Smoke you in bongs man/
It's almost illego/
You'll be shot up in Piza/
Kinda chopped up in Rica/
Then you shipped up and changed boy.../
like Maddonna Cicconea/
Now you gotta respect, "I ref my calls"/
Disco inferno's gone, them hippiez fall/
Gangsta took over from chains to ball/
So the chiches being the bitches talkin/
Will be crippled, left there disabled like stevin hawkins/
I ain't boostin about much in my wallet.../
But all yall thugs out there lookin at a casino walkin/

Valiant 05-14-05 04:10 PM

Rate this, need feed back

Pro. 05-14-05 05:14 PM

That was aiight..couldve used more multis but it had its moments like(You'll be shot up in Piza/
Kinda chopped up in Rica/
Then you shipped up and changed boy.../
like Maddonna Cicconea/)
that was coo...but I felt it was alot like juelz style..sorta mainstream thinking nothing
edgy.

5/10 cuz it was halfway there but ran out of gas. no hate jus opinion!

MoTiF 05-14-05 06:12 PM

Sorry wasnt feelin this at ALL.

Kawn Flixx 05-14-05 07:57 PM

Dont forget to drop a link......

Valiant 11-12-06 11:55 PM

Yes Blue...(like a year and a half later)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3106290
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190739


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