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i think i have flow and structure down pretty much, and my vocab isnt to bad but could be better. but i think where i am realy lackin in is my complexity i find my spits to simple and i think i lose alot from that. how can i increase thier complecity? by adding multi's and stuff? thanx

metaphors add to complexity:)

aight ill try doin sumor of those

good advice, metas help alot