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K-M vs Deathblow
Battle Rules:
20-30 lines..... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-21-07 at 11:10 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
Deathblow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-07 02:26 PM.
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K-M has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-07 02:38 PM.
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this little faggot, challenging me,
Nothing more then shit, can't you see? We can tell that you're a light wieght, when you're fucking with the best be ready for a fight. I'm rapping here, prepare for the DEATHBLOW, I'll cut you up put on a show. I'll shove my foot up our ass and knock out your teeth, I'll leave you swimming with the fish, like around a reef. No brain in your motherfucking head, I can tell that you are inbred. Blood fills your eyes, Mixes with tears, watch as the pussy cry's. I'm standing here with the mic in hand, You're shitty raps are getting kind of bland. I'm sitting hear bobbing my head to the beat, your lazy ass has trouble lifting himself to his feet. You think this is a game, bitch? Illput your brains on the floor by giving my finger a simple twitch. Can't you see now, you simple cunt, I'll knock your teeth out the back of your head, the ones in the front. |
done this quick.......
this guy cant be serious wanting to battle me... i'll deploy real "deathblows" against u..... ....like cherokee stabs with spears on frontier weaklings.... i'll grip the mic device like an anacondas grip around food to eat..... then "devour" your rhyme scripts quick like a deadly fungus infected disease..... strangling my opponent is a must peforming combatant techniques.... i'll put the "pencil" to your eyes like "filling in circles for multiple choice answers".... .....if u wanna "test" me..... best believe u nothin against me nothing to stress in this battle..... ....i'll end this "beef" by taking the butcher blade to this "cattle"..... these punches will crush u.... .....like vehicle tires running over rotten animals on highways..... this is no "street fighter" competition so understand that i dont "play"...... cause if u comin my way..... .....you'll feel the "burning waves of energy" hit u like "UVA cancerous sun rays"..... so put on your protection but even the vest i'll shatter in an instant.... cause executing with percision lyrical sniper action against u... ...... is my instructed mission.... flows coming explicit ready to rip u and leave incisions..... im a "bad karma example" against u "ruining your luck"... .....like a "bad superstition"...... good luck.....~1~ |
........uppin on this yall vote............~1~.............
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This was feedback posted for K-M
deathblows...
ya flow was decent... but ya punches was lacking... it wasnt hitting hard nor was it well created... it was more simple then complex and didnt make me say ouu or nice.. i just was like ooh ok and?... keep practising u'll get better just focus more when u write... this is a battle not a cypher so u gotta say things that'll make people say DANM that was hot... cuz i basicly already knew what u was gonna say before i read it... it was more like uw as just flowing thats all.. keep trying.. ha you won this one hands down... flow smooth.. punches was decent but i've seen better... but not bad.. creativeness was decent.. im guess'in u knew ua int need to come hard for this guy so u just put together someshit and didnt waste to much time on it... 300 J.G we running this rap shit... |
This was feedback posted for K-M
Diss was a good battle yo. lol k-m can si u not tryin haha, dah otha cat did his thing but i think he went 2 simple naww mean. but overall good battle.
ya'lll return dah favor n check my battles out zeen pce |
thanks for the feed back Ransum....Sin Sere.....yeah i did this shit up quick keystyled it.....tryin to get some battles up and end them quick....stay up deathblow your verse wasn't bad but a few good punches would have helped.....~1~
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Voted For: K-M
Punches-K-M Multies-K-M well u get the point but both was aight but couldve been better though return the favor good battle! |
lolz....smh@ u fly E i had no multis kid....but thanks for voting.....uppen on this ....~1~
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idc i was in a hurry lol u still got my vote keep it up lol!
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Good job dude. This is like my first time rapping though so...
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This was feedback posted for K-M
K-M This Verse Was Pretty Cool, U Had Some Lyrical Moments....U Had Sum Nice Punches Too...When Deathblow Had None...
But As Far As Deathblow Goes.....U Need Some Work Son |
thanks for the feedback fames.....your first time death blow ? well not bad for your first time....just keep workin on your punches when battling and you'll be straight....~1~
upppin!!!!!11 |
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