Demize VS GUNFAMGENERAL254
 

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Iight Then Spit First Nigga.......................

For short I'll call you Gunfag, cuz all you do is brag
Bitch you talk all the shit, but it ain't sick
Didn't dare spit first, cuz you afraid to get hurt
Already got reputation on the board, as a homosexual flirt
Yous a fuckin redneck, better keep yourself in check
Cuz I'll send you to the chair, so fast it ain't even fair
I love how bitches like you do, pretending to be MC on the net
The truth is you're just a netcee, a fucking wannabe
Simple verses taking days to complete, here you get eaten like meat
Should just lay low, bludgeon you to death, so you get some flow
I'll take your head off with an axe, rip the thoraxe out your back
Don't even tryna flip my script, that'll get your throat slit
When you learn to spell come back, when you're more than an act
I can tell you don't even rap, just a lil keystyler I'd bitchslap

Haha, like I said, taking days to spit.

What you doing bitch, browsing around for some lyrics and punches to bite? Come on spit this verse, it ain't gotta take all day long.

hahaha demize u suck on the real

Back up what you say bitch, put up a battle, I'll clip your fucking clit, fagget.

Ok Nigga I That Shit Was Wack,and It Was Prolly Written/
U Just Like A Female On Her Period Cuz U Always Bitchin/
Nigga U A Hoe And Yo Flow Is Slow/
I Would Tell U Your Mom Sucked My Dick/
But U Already Kno/
Nigga To Tell U The Truth Im In This Game To Lead/
I'll Fill Yo Bitch Ass With Shells Like A Pack Of Sunflowerseeds/
U Think Yo Flow Is Tight Then U Aint Heard Shit/
U Sound Motivated To Me/
So I'll Just Call U A Bitch With A Purpose/
Nigga When I'm Around Yo Bitch Pussy Is Neva Dry/
U Aint No Gangsta/
I'll Blow Yo Fuckin Brains To The Sky And Tell U To Think High!

Man Somebody Vote So I Can Win............................................... .................

i am not the one to team up on 1 dude
but your flow is wack u feel like u have something to prove
i was born to flow, destined to rhyme
u was born so i could put yo bitch ass name in my lines
u steppin to gunfam, u steppin to me
now u steppin like u was in a fuckin faternity
i fill your body with holes, i fill your body shells
blood leakin, ears ringing from the sound of my bells
nigga u dont want it, i am example the kid
i went from rags to riches and look wut i done did

yo i think gunfam won

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Uhm, he don't win cuz of your little hate vote, bitch.

gunfam wins cuz hiz punches wurr betta throughout...while demize ur's wuz in and out u kno..good battle almost...both keep elevating

opener gfg
flow tie
vocab tie
personals tie
punches gunfam
closer gunfam
gunfam work on personals and vocab
demize work on vocab structure and personals

gfam has this one won for vocab and flow. he had good personal. this was not that good of a battle. demise had flow and structure on lock, again this is not that good of a battle.
vote~gfam

demize: structure was good....vocab on an aight level, but your punchline were not hittin...i think u need to elevate slight a bit...but i see potential

gunfam: structure was a little off. vocab was poor too. but u flowed a lot better demize flow seemed slow and boring ....and even though yours was short i got to say that your punchlines is what carried u to probably when this battle.

v/gunfam