ooooo weeee "Spit the Jag"...different Q here...hmmm
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^Click on "Spit the jag"


Beat: Swollen Drumz
Hook: Q
Verses: All Q


Concept: I had an experience in church where some guys decided to sit around and hate on gay people. I stood up to them and then made this song...

I wanted somethin very unique...So, as you'll hear, the beginning of the track is quite different...


My singing gets pitchy...But, I had fun making this track.

Holla



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240116
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240107

I mean...one person could at least drop feed








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You sound so much like andre 3000 bro...

Only critisism I have for this track is it was too short... Should of been another verse.......

Other than that.. This shit was real well done, n I'm a picky bastard when it comes to hip hop... I really got nothing bad to say......

Good work......

^^^Preciate da feed brotha







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Beat - Is Kinda gay.
I dont really like the hook at all... wow, soooo anoyin'.

Andree 3000?... I dont hear it, but w/e

I cant understand you really in your verse?.. do you speak english or?.. hmmm

2nd verse its finally gettin' better, this verse is pretty dope, lmao.. haha, when you were freakin' out there, that made me laugh.. so I dont know that might be a good thing!

lol, hahaha... I will call your bluff... wit like a lil girl or somethin in the background.. haha... well, thats just extreme.

overall, it was a decent track I guess.... good job!!!

oh now your recording.....otherwise i enjoyed the track....poppy but not pop music.....fun track to listen to

lol...u and tony man...yea, Im tryna get baCK IN The groove of things...I jus had fun makin this track...


dats wut Im about from here on out man...havin fun with it all




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word beat is different.....this song reminds me of that song from beetlejuice lol....flow is coo but i wish ur vocals were more in ur face naw mean...try puttin a limiter on ur vox....this seems like a pop track overall this coo for wut it is.......my name is the q ill call ur bluff lol this is coo.....pz

Word.....very unique.

You should keep shit like this in your arsenal. I didn't really like the part where you were saying "My...Name...Is...Tha Q.....But you thought it was you" or whatever you said. Your voice at that part just didn't seem to fit the tone of the song. Yeah...seems like that's your hook. I think if you would have come up with something to capture the escence of the song a little more. But to be honest, the second hook seemed to fit better than the first. Maybe it was just the contrast of the singing that threw it off for me. I don't know. But yeah, the rest was pretty nice man. I liked it all except what I was bitching about....lol.


Good shit man :thumbup:

^^preciate it bruh








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Been a while since I've checked out your stuff...

Whoa. Different kind of beat.

Holy shit...man. You were good before, but now this shit is unbelievable. Flow is tight. Delivery mixes nice with the track. The singing was good, but not as well delivered as the verses. Other than that, it was too short.

Good job man...definitely a download.

man i feel like ive traveled in the fifties .....um i like the attempt here but it seemed a lil monotous your execution for your vision is real astute but the my name is the q nigga shit didn t seem to fit .....some of the libs clogged the song kinda but this was just overall eh for me i might just not enjoy the beat tho cuz it is repetative sounding .but i definately applaud your attempt keep doin you ......rtf

okay returning the favor, been a mad long time since I peeped u....awww u just reminded me why I always hated swollen drumz beats....I think hook come in too quick, I came in so quick an abrupt I was halfway in before I realized it was hook...so far this is alil too offcolor of a song for me to really get into....but u rocking the fast flow nice...but being that u really trying to tell a story or make a point u should flowed slower so ya lyrics coulda been front an center....quality is decent but u need to bring up ya mids more so ya vocals gain more clarity....overall it was decent for what it was...jus not my type of song ya dig but keep doin what u do...1

^^Preciate the feed


and LOL @ everyone thinkin the beginning is the hook...Nah, the hook doesn't come in until around 56 seconds...

That was verse 1



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I like your flow a lot on this. beats pretty coo i like the gospel shit with it. Your hooks pretty coo. I kinda agree with g killaz bout how ya flow to fast it's hard to understand what ya sayin though the flow it really ill. just cant understand it. the overall track is pretty coo just not somin i'd bump all the time.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...573#post3145573