"my color" feedback....
 

real story about someone i know...gettin this shit off my chest, all keyed

You can love me or hate me cuz at the end it won't matter/
If you would ever take a bullet for me shit i'm most flattered/
Most defintely i've been rejected for most of my life/
Injected from the rest, enduring this strife/
Is it my color or my religion?, sometimes it's hard bein a christian/
Atheists think they got it easy they don't know what they're missen/
Nigga got a problem u fuckin tell me like a man/
You givin me attitude n lip cuz I gave u my helpin hand?/
Trained you from the ground up, even though I never give a fuck/
But cuz my color ain't yours u gotta bitch n strut/
I hear shit behind my back, mumbles from this coward/
A man that don't speak up is a man without mind power/
Seperation cuz we come from different lives/
He workin for a goal I can see the determination in his eyes/
Momma musta raised a fool, brought up to hate colors as long as it don't belong to you/
Contradicting bob marley instead of one love there's two/
Blamin me for bein ignorant, pointin fingers at the innocent/
Guilty as charged for bein uneducated, its just my color u hatin/
Interracial relationships is a sin in ur eyes, just ur color ur datin/
It's like cold war, everyone's fightin but the progress is unknown/
This fuckin racism won't stop until Jesus comes and takes us home

it's alright some of the bars are alittle uneven kinda not making the flow what it could be, the rhymings kinda basic too but overall it's a pretty good peice i'd give it 6.5/10

no doubt man good lookin
ya it needs some work, keyed that shit

Naw Naw, That Waz Nice, I've Seen People Post Shit Thats ALOT Worse, Keep Doin Ya Thang Mayn n As Long As You Keepin It Real Then Cant Nobody Touch You, Good Lookin, Holla !!1!!

yea i agree with Shottaboi up there i' have seen alot worse! Keep it up good drop