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poison 09-27-04 12:22 AM

poison vs x-on
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 5

Check in by: 09-30-04 at 12:22 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-27-04 12:23 AM

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 12:23 AM.

poison 09-27-04 12:34 AM

fags like u i tax in a stairway
leave u depressed like u got a bad hair day
this man's a discrace
who got punched in his face
ur rap is garbage man, cuz thats where its placed
i got more chips than lays
more chicks than mase
eatin rappers like they all bait
then spitten them out like the tooth paste colgate

DONE!

System 09-27-04 05:28 PM

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 05:28 PM.

System 09-27-04 05:30 PM

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-04 05:30 PM.

x-on 09-27-04 05:49 PM

"Poison", dog your style will never get anybody effected./
poison a radom name that your a just selected.//
i'm the one who can take poison and put it in your eye/
and five mintutes later i'll see every blood cell start to die//
Cause don't get it twisted i'll take any element/
use chemical calistenics x-on nothing but inteligent.//
And my mom told me not to pick on a handicap/
But it's this fake mc's fault for trying to rap//
16 year old king spitting without his crown/
Judges be fair, you know who one this fucking round//

fotosynthesis 09-29-04 05:07 PM

Voted For: x-on

that was sick , i give this vote to x-on, good vocab,good punchlines

x-on 09-29-04 09:25 PM

yo thanks dog.. NEED MORE VOTES!!! UPIN!

Let's get this dong with people, you know the deal..

SubtleTee 09-29-04 09:28 PM

Voted For: x-on

fags like u i tax in a stairway
leave u depressed like u got a bad hair day
^ Terrible

this man's a discrace
who got punched in his face
^ Aweful, no punch

ur rap is garbage man, cuz thats where its placed
i got more chips than lays
more chicks than mase
eatin rappers like they all bait
then spitten them out like the tooth paste colgate
^ WHERE ARE YOUR PUNCHES? ARE YOU RETARDED?


Now for x-on

"Poison", dog your style will never get anybody effected./
poison a radom name that your a just selected.//
^ Not a real punch, weak name flip

i'm the one who can take poison and put it in your eye/
and five mintutes later i'll see every blood cell start to die//
^ ANother weak punch

Cause don't get it twisted i'll take any element/
use chemical calistenics x-on nothing but inteligent.//
^ Weak punches keep coming

And my mom told me not to pick on a handicap/
But it's this fake mc's fault for trying to rap//
^ Only good punch

16 year old king spitting without his crown/
Judges be fair, you know who one this fucking round//
^ Weak weak closer


This battle sucked really badly. X-on gets my vote because he actually had some punches, but both emcees seriously need to elevate. They're horrible.

x-on 09-29-04 09:52 PM

hahha, hey thanks for the vote.. Butwe gonna get are battle right, like you said.. See how hook end up home boy.

x-on 09-29-04 11:35 PM

LETs get this over with please.. vote vote vote!!!

Parallel 10-01-04 02:09 PM

Voted For: x-on

nice battle i feel x-on took this tho he had some alright vocab and he had strongger punches as well but still needs work with his rhyming n shit but ya nice shit tho:D

VOTE: x-on

return the favour in my battle verse NET the links in my sig ust clcik it and vote for me nice battle peace

Sik Wit It 10-02-04 12:08 AM

Voted For: x-on

..Wack Battle..

X-on:
yo punches were hard & they connected
tha flow on urs was ok *didnt fall*
yo structure was aight *no stretched lines*
and tha vocab was good

poison:
you need to elevate more
yo punches were weak
tha structure....*no comment*
and yo vocab was "ok"...

badgurl3136 10-02-04 02:27 PM

Voted For: x-on

yo my vote is for X because he has a better word flow, and vocb. But he should be ashamed for battlein a newbie while he knew he's skill was 10x ova the other guys! Put it this way X.....u SHOULDN'T be battlin people worse then u...it don't make u any better!


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