Hola Hovito
 

16 bars over Hola Hovito. just looking for feedback on flow, lyrics, and delivery. any feedback is welcome.

i replied to Breathe and Jealous Negroes.

www.soundclick.com/focusonthemic

I deleted all your other threads, and will continue to do so until you reply to 2 differenet songs FOR EACH DROP. Your spam ain't cool.

-Phenom

i love this beat by da way :thumbup: good choice

buffering...56gay yes im still on 56gay

aight here it is...off da bat i can tell ur vocals ur too loud...turn it down some...if ur spittin on a computer mic with a stock soundcard go to volume control and put ur mic volume down to about around da middle so u dont clip dat much..(yeah i used to record on a comp mic LOL)anyways...flow is there...just u know get a lil bit hype or just exxagerate some of ur words i guess wat im trying to say is put some feelings to it..feel me?but i other than that i like wat u got here....

keep spittin doggy..

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