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West Auckland
http://www.myspace.com/7thendproductions
Produced by shadowsville. West Aucklands were Im at, so alot a the lyrics relate to local ish, so yeh, some of it might not add up. Drop links and ill hit them up. 1 |
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ok ok...beat is crazy........
id say turn up the vocals a bit, lovin the emotion on this and the energy, good flow ur hangin with it well..... like the chorus......really ridin the beat 2nd verse....got a lil versatile...more of a twista flow now, u changed it from fast and slowed it a lil, likes overall id say my only thing with this is turn up the vocals, i know ur usin a comp mic, but ur makin it work, it aint that bad u just gotta turn it up cuz the bass from the beat is kinda absorbin ur verses thumbs up |
Thanks for the feed. will get at one a your tracks soon.
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damn
you was flowin yo ass off |
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Beat, is a little diffrent..feeling it.
Chorus is decent.. First verse, has a real nice flow and the lyrics are good.. Chorus again.. Second verse, has a little slower flow than first, but it still fits and sounds good, sketchy at a point.. The first verse on this was real nice, and it definitly stuck out. Good creativity with the flow and chorus... Nice drop fam |
ok...fast tongue type beat...let's see if u come with that...
ok...ur tryin to...ur presence is real weak on this track...like too dry...u def shud dub ur vocals... ur flow is decent...but this beat can be murdered...All u did was slap it the hook was interesting in its delivery...but needed some ad libs in the dead spots ambitious track...but lacked polish |
word nice beat, shadowville yup. Your quality def sounds better, i dont know what you did but word it's coo. I'm feelin ya hook a lot man, very catchy but you should added some adlibs or gave it some coo ecko effect or somin. Your flow is pretty good man, most of it is on lock. But I'm havin troubles understand some the words you sayin in some parts of your verses, for the most part it's good but just a few lines you know. Maybe you flowin it a little to fast in them parts im not sure but just work that out next time. I'm def feelin this track probably your best I've heard yet man nice drop.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239248 |
This joint got its debut on air Sunday night 1/21/07 over the Conspiracy airwaves on the OYD radio show :)
-Don Tito Bronsky |
yeh thanks for that, now how abouts some feed?
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and u call me wack??
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