Todays Man...
 

Was jus thinkin n shit so...wrote up a lil sumthin n recorded it,i think it came out pritty good...as usual it coulda ben produced better but the lyrics an't clippin as much here

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm

"todays man"

I don't like it.

The hook was Garbage.
Your flow is horrible. Too choppy.

Topic wise an lyrical wise good.
Now u just have to transform the text to audio.
Work on your flow and voice. Seem like ur tryin too hard. -1