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mic-wrecker vs. Deliquint
16-20 linez
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~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~ ~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~ ~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~ ~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~ ~run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~ ~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~ ~it's about time i silence you and leave you confined~ ~man you couldnt wreck mics if you took the whole demolition team when you rhymed~ ~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~ ~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~ ~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~ ~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~ ~these is real statements, engraving ya face wit ailments~ ~no stail-mates, like the old testament i destroy ya pages~ ~i dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~ ~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john~ |
del is the man. he was much betta. yeeah.ma vote is del
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yo he aint even done his shit homie lol
uppin mic reckers verse |
uppin for mic wreckers verse or its a DQ
where yo at man |
yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE// after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote// i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things// get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine// i new u was puss, these bars snuff one of ya nine leave yu with eight// i spotted ya tendancies lookin around for another man to help you procreate// nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu// n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu// :laugh2: i can tell by ya linez u one of dem catholics that extort sinz by fuckin men// well shit don a priest colla fuck a kid to some r. kelly an u'd fit right in// :hump: these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit// but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience// :laugh: but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me// i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me// |
uppin this shit holla at the godd......................
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Please RTV
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138869 ~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~ ~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~ ~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~ ~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~ ^^^ I always thought multi-rhyme rappers used too much filler in their lyrics...and this is what you have done It is not really hitting Mic hard at all...it sounds fancy. But, you're supposed to be attackin him. ~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~ ~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~ ~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~ ~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~ ^^^Decent imagery...but the punch isn't hard at all... yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE// after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote// i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things// get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine// ^^ That's more like it...punches hit harder than dukes... Vote: Mic Wrecker |
1-0 me uppin this shit yea yea....holla at da godd mayne
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Here was the first impression: first guy had good similies..probably too much, and mic-wrecker had more punches....so I am reading this again and analysing line by line. Here's Rising's rubric
Punches Flow Literary terms-metaphors, wordplays, and similies Punches go to Delinquent just because he had the best punch in this whole battle. THis battle had good punches but were too played out. Delinquient had one good punch. It's quality not quantity. All your other ones flowed well but they were simple and played out. You need more original stuff like your closer. times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~ ~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~6/10 run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~ ~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~5/10 ~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~ ~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~6.5/10 ~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~ ~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~5/10 dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~ ~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john~9/10 Mic-wrecker More creative but your punches were just as played out as his. i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things// get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine//7/10 nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu// n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu// 6.5/10 these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit// but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience//6/10 but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me// i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me//6.5/10 Flow-I give it to Delinquent by just a bit cause he had more multies and better structure...but both flowed well while couple lines were bad. Literary Terms-Delinquent with a lot of similies and wordplays. But I think Mic-wreckers was a little more complex but that doesnt always win you the battle. Sorry if I made any bad calls....good battle pz... Rising Sun aka Mike12Ikeda |
ya mic took this one but del ur alot better flower then he is but he was stalkin u with his flows u were wondering off about girls with mustaches n shit either way i give this one to mic
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dam can i get the poll vote tho.........uppin!!!!!!
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~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~ ~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~ 5/10 ~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~ ~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~ 6/10 ~run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~ ~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~ 5/10 ~it's about time i silence you and leave you confined~ ~man you couldnt wreck mics if you took the whole demolition team when you rhymed~ 5/10 ~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~ ~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~ 6/10 ~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~ ~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~ 6/10 ~these is real statements, engraving ya face wit ailments~ ~no stail-mates, like the old testament i destroy ya pages~ ~i dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~ ~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john~ 5/10 yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE// after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote// 6/10 i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things// get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine// 7/10 i new u was puss, these bars snuff one of ya nine leave yu with eight// i spotted ya tendancies lookin around for another man to help you procreate// 7/10 nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu// n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu// 6/10 i can tell by ya linez u one of dem catholics that extort sinz by fuckin men// well shit don a priest colla fuck a kid to some r. kelly an u'd fit right in// 6/10 these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit// but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience// 5/10 but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me// i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me// 6/10 This battle was kinda weak the punches were there but they didnt hit that hard and the wordplay here was really one sides Deliquint u can use a little elevation and also some more complexity nice structure by both of u but it came down 2 the harder punch and better wordplay my vote ~~~Mic~~~~ |
hott shit im up 2-1 holla at cha boi....................
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mic-wrecker plain and simple won this battle. better punches. both had nice structures and ending punches but mic-wrecker had better opening punches. mic-wrecker's whole verse flowed well. deliquint yours did too but mic's personals hit hard.
vote=mic-wrecker |
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