GhoStLy RhYmez (Sik Shit)
 

I Cause Conditions That Have Ya Wishin It Can Be Fixed With A Aid Kit
My Mission Is Similiar to My Intentions, "Not Letting You Make It"

So Take it Wisely And Wise Up Before The Clock Drops And Times Up
I Push weight And Do Coke But thAts not Why My "Linez Tough"

I was Raised with Heat And Thats Cuz My Momz Couldnt Afford Gas n Light
My Bro Sais My Glock Studders But Only Becus i Shot the Same Bastard Twice

I Make My Point With A Quick Inverse and Thats Cuz i Failed Math
Ghost Is quick To Put Domes On A price,So I guess i Sh0uld Start To Sell Hats

I Walk With A Eager To Kill As i Pass Enemies Who Wish Me Death
No Prositute But Im Onda Corner Of The Block if u Wish to get me next

Im A Threat To Many People And They Dare To Speak My Name
Probably Cuz The Only Time u Mention it Is When u Explaining Something Strange

( just getting back in my text game so Holla)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237671
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236995

upping for feed no mind the other copy haha UPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!

upping for feed stop the bullshit..............

Overall I liked it. I like the first couple bars the most cuz it seemed like it would piss someone off and Ive seen a lot of people try to use the coke thing in their rhymes but none of them got it right but I think you nailed it. Nice lil flow ya did there.

good looks bro upzzz.....

uppin for some feed on this.........

I liked it, nice flow and Vocabulary went well with the structure.

good looks upping...................

feed.............

If you take the "Sik" out of the part in brackets, then you will have my feedback.

man nigga just drop some feed..........................

Nope. You see, I am done with trying to critique people. I fucking drop honest feedback and just because sometimes I rag on a piece because it generally is just trash, most fuckers get all protective and start talking shit to me.

And, I really don't have the time to talk shit with internet dudes.

NICE FLOW i LIKED IT

if u aint gonna give feed then cool uppin for some honest feedback.