cordless vs oreo
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6 - 15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-19-04 at 11:47 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
cordless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 11:49 PM.
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oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 11:51 PM.
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i shoot venom when i spit like i was a cobra
and i make rappers like you retire from the game like your name was hove, you must be a constapated rapper cuz im waiting for you to shit on me, but not some of that nasty shitm you aint R.kelly, you know you lost when you accepted to battle oreo, cuz from wat i understand you is a puddle, you have no flow, just to let you know that i aint playing, ill put you eyes on my vocal cords so you can see wat i am saying, im the victor here its no debate, no lie, cuz ive already seen your fate like i got jesus eyes, OOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOO |
rippin....bout to tell a story yo/
about this little grimmy cat - it was a bitch named oreo/ before he know - i was bustin him up - then he put me on the maury show/ cryin little bitch - i told you not to squeal/ now youre in my porno all on top shaqeal o'neal/ imma chew you up and spit you out like altoids/ you fallin off kid - looks like you playin for the cowboys/ whats mal noise - is that you gettin on my nerves/ ive read your shit - sounds like you singin to the birds/ in this life - you gotta attempt shit in your battle/ i warned you kid - dont bruise your nutsack on my sattle |
Voted For: oreo
lol weal battle but oreo came otu a bit harder still weak tho needs lots and lots of elavation: punches: no one vocab: no one wordplay: no one metas: no one multi's: no one opener: oreo closener: oreo flow: oreo vote/ oreo |
Voted For: oreo
another weak battle but oreo came with 1 good punch compaired to the rest of both of your verses,puddle line was basically the only decent punch in the whole thing??.... keep elevatin,both of you... |
Voted For: oreo
my vote is goin to oreo caz of the punchlinez an meta'z cordless i liked the multis but that was bout it the ounches were wack the word play was ok an thats about it oreo wasnt dat much better but he was better the eyes in the vocal cords was the best verse in the battle loose the oreo in the last bar tho....not feelin that |
Voted For: cordless
damn yo i def have to say this battle went to cordless strait up man no doubt u had a sick punches and nice struchture and u just had it all the way man good job oreo man you lacked style and flow..your raps were all like wrtoe out and not that good of a structure work on your shit man cuz you def need help cuz you just got delt! return the favor if you can |
Voted For: cordless
weak battle punches- cord personals- cord multis- cord metas- cord word play- neither flow- oreo Cord work on punches and more personals. U barely got my vote. Work on your "multis" also. Oreo u had one good punch that wuz it. Work on punches and personals. Cord: "imma chew you up and spit you out like altoids/ you fallin off kid - looks like you playin for the cowboys/" i just like altoids. u dont spit out altoids. oreo: "just to let you know that i aint playing, ill put you eyes on my vocal cords so you can see wat i am saying," second line wuz good, but work on wordin. v/ cord |
word. i wasnt really goin for punches anyway. i mean i could ahve said some shit like "your styles so ill correct - the symptoms kill teretze"...but i was just cruisin. it was a weak battle...but i aint worried. its all fair in hip hop and freestyles. (if you dont understand what i just wrote then dont be discouraged....i barely understand the shit myself)
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shit all my battles are just quikies, if i could see wat they look like i would rip the, from head to toe
or hat to shoe |
Voted For: oreo
yo i gotta give this one up for OREO cuzz he had some nice lines ans good vocab and a good structure them lines was tight tho never seen ppl use them before ah ha do ya thing cordless ya lines was tight to mayn dont get me wrong but oreo had better vocab and structure and thats what i think its mainly about |
man willl somone close tis battle with my vinnig vote?
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Voted For: oreo
Ayo I like ya verse over all cam harder in all the areas I vote in. Punches, metas, creativity, and flow, nice . v/oreo. If you aint got a crew then try out for Original Sound, we could use another nice kat in the squad. |
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