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Zikio version 2
We got the rules set up
10-12 lines normal rules you spit first I'll wait for you to spit and then i will alright I'll be waiting |
u from green bay so u must know the packers
ur like ahmand green and Im like the eagels linebacker Im about to hit u wit such great force U gon have to pay an incerible amount of life support I be the bring the symptons of fear and paralysis try to shoot me dogg all ur shots be missin my lyrics are of the supreme the higher u say u got beef but all u got is oscar meyer I be over here bringing the torture my burning lyrcis be bringing the shorchere so now its time to lose u ran out of luck this a bubba in jail moment u been fucked |
here, I'll start keyin' now...
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Aw son, I'm sorry to see you didn't learn like you said you did
Awfully terrible, and seeing you writing made me feel sorry kid See you're from orlando, don't matter, you still won't beat me Your verses are so simple they belongs in The World Of Disney You keep your secret away? Nope avi clearly states you're gay I study my prey, and so far, you're just one of my daily delays Staying away? Nope once again you're missing the whole point While you hope to be dope, you still ain't on level with a joint You missin' a sig, Like you're not original and sign annonomous You're doomed, with you being the weaker side out of both us blah blah and once again... i don't know I'm bored |
blah blah blah, just vote...
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Blah blah, just vote already...
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my thoughts
I dont have enough posts to officially vote, but here is my thoughts...
Dope definitly took this. Zikio came too simplistic. His punches weren't creatvie enough and lacked any real punch. It was a nice try w/ the personal,it just didn't do the job. Dope Name, decent punches w/good personals and some nice creativity. Didn't need much to though, to take this one. Not even close.My Vote: Dope Name |
my vote goes to dope name, hit punches hit harder and i like the structure better, some words didnt rhyme that well but they still did the job
-zikioversion2 your punches were there but weak.... no creativity really.... the opener was ok i guess....the closer was weak...alot of filler....keep at it... vote- Dope name return the favor-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839 |
Blah Blah, someone vote on this, now...
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Dope was dope man but i liked version 2 w/ the packers eagles shit dat was niice
ThA Ce Vote-Dope |
Blah Blah Blah, vote c'mon people, this can be closed if some people check it out...
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Blah Blah Blah vote on this already...
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really rappers?
herb... call out feeble then, dumbass... |
having the same problems in my battle...lol....nobody voting....ehh....lol....Dope takes this for just having better hits without a doubt.....Zikio would sway from subject of battle and diss his opponent with dumb shit....Dope at least had better personals and some funny punches
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Punches - Dope Personals - Dope...av punch...and orlando Opener - Dope Closer - Dope Vote - Dope....if there is any reason y this should not count as a vote....then there is something wrong...lol....Dope had better hits period....Zikio needs to up his style and drop more direct and harder hits..... Please Help Kill One Of My Slept Battles: ~RaPiDfIrE~ vs. ven0m (4-0) ~RaPiDfIrE~ vs. Machavelli (3-1) |
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