intensify effect vs Lil Nae2
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Crew Battle:
Violent Type VS Emerica's Finest

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 05:58 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Lil Nae2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 05:59 PM.

IE, your mouth cant write a hook, your mouth cant write a punch/
your mouth couldnt rap up a sandwhich if it wanted some lunch/
your weak jabs arent gonna help you get past this bout/
hell your mom told me even she could knock you out/
he just another bad rapper that no label will account/
he just another cheap-ass, like ho's on discount/
your name's like fuckin mexican, mowin lawns is all you could afford/
you quit karate coz your punches couldnt break the wooden board/
i'll murder IE prewritten shit, his fake scripts sunken/
nothing he 'drops is Spur of the moment unless he traded Tim Duncan/
still your thinkin you can beat me... cmon, now please/
im like a fuckin virus... atchoo, sneeze/
your rhyme's are a glass cup, dawg, empty and any idiot can see through/
your dick can't impress women, they always ask "Is that only a preview?/
if you're interested in livin', you better plan your next retreat/
cause you'd get murdered by a bitch from Sesame Street/
son, the pain I'm inflicting is sharper than an adulterer's scorned wife/
like inferno, my rhymes are eternal, so they'll burn you in your afterlife /
you honestly thought you'd beat me? You believed you had a spark?/
but what's that written on your tombstone? The final question mark/

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 05:11 PM.

in-limited.... ahh i hate these but fuck it....

its like im flirt'in with lil nae2 cuz we all see she ASS, shake'in ya life to the last...
call it a violent flash, , cuz i'll have lil nae2 "skull-in-da-air" like a pirate-flag.. 1
ur lyric are pure wackness, i coudln't tell you what's worse...
man even starving ethopians wouldn't feed off of your wack ass verses.... 2
use your brain, all ur attempts at lies was cuz ur on some bitch shit,
cuz ur chances of winning , are slimmer than da clippers wining da NBA championship....3
Only way your name gets out, 'is the obituaries', and nobody loves news
In your mind I'm 'over rated'... Thats because I'm 'Ranked above You!'...4
lil-nae2'll get poped, i'll put ya name in my W list N leave this dame-boxed
u a sector of belifs, cuz christans is known to reign ova orthodox... 5 *get it*

I've seen your 'attempts at personals', try something that hasn't been said-be-fore
Rap? It's obvious you just begun, so ill slay your wordplay 3 times cuz you've never Met-a-Four... 6
U 'wanna be hard', but its like ya pens editable cuz u write that sweet-shit...
and its true my silencer whisper.. so come here let me tell u a secret.... 7 *bang bang*
peep-this, how i demolish ya pen, so u wont have to write again
cuz my punches Leave u in_a_maze, and u'r going crazy.. cuz u gonna "right-again" *write-again* 8
I got rhymes for years ' your loosing every thing you work'ed for
you must be -dirt poor- cuz it looks like you didnt pay attention ta skillz when you were learnen ta -work yours....9
i ask for a battle with comp, and look what E.finest is sending me...
someone so weak a 1,000 volts shocked on ya verse N still couldnt bring the energy.... 10
This kid is like feet, the way u stay getting socked..
no medical, but just like a tidal waves, ill fucking smash-this- Doc(k)... 11

FINISH THIS HERB.....

i'll start Snatchin lilnae 'Family-Trees' And Introduce'Em 2 a Fire-Place..
N slap this bitch so hard, her Skin i'll look like a compititor for an Albino Race.... 12 BITCH!!!!! *albino=white*

ok nice verse lets get some votes.................

upp'in............................................ ............

Voted For: intensify effect

aiyo this waz an eh battle IE had alot of good personals,
nice punches and harder line....tha only bad things bout
ya verse was sum forced multi'z...nice drop....
az frpo LIL NAE i wasnt felling the lines all ur punches were lame fillers ecept 4 about 2....good structure..to basic tho
all u had going for u waz the tim duncan line

vote=IE for harder punches then NAE's forced ones and
simple bars

upp'in for more votes.................................

This was feedback posted for Lil Nae2
 

uppin fo vote so vote on dis please................

Voted For: intensify effect

V/INTENSIFY EFFECT......close battle but ima give this to IE....cause his had more creative punchs an used nice vocab wit it.......Nae2....u had sum good punchs but they weren't consistent an less complex.....
Punch=IE
multi's=Tie
vocab=IE
structure=Tie
Overall=IE

yea thinks fo da vote uppin fo more dont sleep on dis

uppin fo votes dont sleep on dis need to get closed

upp'in this battle.....................................