GhoStLy RhYmez (Sik Shit)
I Cause Conditions That Have Ya Wishin It Can Be Fixed With A Aid Kit
My Mission Is Similiar to My Intentions, "Not Letting You Make It" So Take it Wisely And Wise Up Before The Clock Drops And Times Up I Push weight And Do Coke But thAts not Why My "Linez Tough" I was Raised with Heat And Thats Cuz My Momz Couldnt Afford Gas n Light My Bro Sais My Glock Studders But Only Becus i Shot the Same Bastard Twice I Make My Point With A Quick Inverse and Thats Cuz i Failed Math Ghost Is quick To Put Domes On A price,So I guess i Sh0uld Start To Sell Hats I Walk With A Eager To Kill As i Pass Enemies Who Wish Me Death No Prositute But Im Onda Corner Of The Block if u Wish to get me next Im A Threat To Many People And They Dare To Speak My Name Probably Cuz The Only Time u Mention it Is When u Explaining Something Strange ( just getting back in my text game so Holla) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237671 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236995 |
upping for feed no mind the other copy haha UPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!
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upping for feed stop the bullshit..............
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Overall I liked it. I like the first couple bars the most cuz it seemed like it would piss someone off and Ive seen a lot of people try to use the coke thing in their rhymes but none of them got it right but I think you nailed it. Nice lil flow ya did there.
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good looks bro upzzz.....
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uppin for some feed on this.........
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I liked it, nice flow and Vocabulary went well with the structure.
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good looks upping...................
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feed.............
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If you take the "Sik" out of the part in brackets, then you will have my feedback.
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man nigga just drop some feed..........................
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Nope. You see, I am done with trying to critique people. I fucking drop honest feedback and just because sometimes I rag on a piece because it generally is just trash, most fuckers get all protective and start talking shit to me.
And, I really don't have the time to talk shit with internet dudes. |
NICE FLOW i LIKED IT
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if u aint gonna give feed then cool uppin for some honest feedback.
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