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wogzta VS illtalic
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no bullshit voting you spit first I'll spit the first time i come online and your verse is up.... its no feeding so i wont get an advantage cos im spitting 2nd.... good luck and have fun |
Background info: me an wogzta were in Lyrical Soldiers (L.S) a lil while back before it died.
You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew, now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you... This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy, but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D... You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in, im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin... I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props, an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops... See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress, sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success... Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown, cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'... Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh, you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"... |
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Notes:
L.S = Lyrical Soldiers Paki = Pakistani Artificial = A.I in his sig Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers "This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch" My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial" Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic... That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time that's 14... good luck :D |
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im bored at college... so a thought id break this down cuz no-one is voting on it... cant poll cuz wog is in my crew... and the sooner one of illtalic's battles closes... then a can battle him... pz illtalic You confessed you "sound stupid".. in front of ya crew, now i'll do wots neccessary.. come half assed.. an still shit on you... lol... pretty good... made me laugh... 7/10 This 'insomniacs' ill?? Well laughter's the best med.. a cheap remedy, but careful readin ur verse too much.. cos its gonna cause an O.D... hmm... wasnt feelin that bar... stretched abit... 5/10 You fled in an 'Instant'.. a fake Soldier that didn't fit in, im sure L.S did help your career.. now look.. they're both in the bin... whoa... good... hard hittin personals... liked this bar... 9/10 I kno ya style kid.. you only joined my crew for props, an the second you were in the fam.. I was labeled an abusive pops... ? didnt understand... 5/10 See i could rape your rep.. fukkn drag queen.. even ur verse wears a dress, sad thing is if i deleted this post you still wouldn't get 'Instant' success... lol... good dissin on my crew... :|... was a good personal though... 7/10 Kid you needa ask around.. everybody knows I'll smash this clown, cos ya rhymes resemble ya wardrobe.. entire style is 'hand-me-downs'... lol... made me laugh again... 8/10 Face it wogzta.. your style's never gonna be mistaken for fresh, you'd resurrect an bite your own played shit.. then try clickin "Refresh"... pretty dope closer... maybe abit forced... but it was good... 8/10 overall... 49/70... some good personals in here... flow was on... structure was good... keep it up... pz wogzta Even in the L.S, your battles were never crunchin-numbers Your style "fell off" faster than a group bungee-jumpers played... but quite good... 6/10 "This illness ain't catchin"... Cos there's none to speak of But your a bacterium, lookin' for anything to "feed" off not bad... flow was abit wierd a think... 6/10 I only have one loss, and that was post-L.S recovery from you Your wackness made me sick... and that's why I left the crew hmm... not bad... not really a personal... 6/10 Madd Writer? For your ass, that reputation doesn't-exist You couldn't "bite" me successfully if you were a "son-of-a-bitch" decent... 7/10 My style is always packin' more heat than Paki-missle But you wouldn't understand natural talent, your "artificial" pretty cool... good second line... good punch... 8/10 Your a little late to learn a valuable lesson, Illtalic... That even if you bit Nas for "7" years you "Still" wouldn't be Illmatic decent punch... decent personal on the name... 7/10 There's a reason I never sleep; I'm always perfectin-my-rhymes Awaits? He can sense an "Instant" loss so he's always checkin-the-time self glorification first line... self glorification second line... not good... 4/10 overall... 44/70... your verse was consistant... until the closer... that ruined it... the rest was a decent verse... flow was on is most places... structure was jus normal... decent... keep it up... pz v/ illtalic his verse had the better punches... won on points... and it had the better flow and stayed more consistant through-out... pz OUT |
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I have carefully compiled a vote but it may be considered hate.. I shall await the go ahead from that greasy fucking wog.. =)
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^ wtf??
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You can vote inspire, but if theres even one mention of my nationality in a negative viewpoint that could affect your vote, your going to IR... good day
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I was going to vote for wogzta but the more I look at it, the more i feel that illtalic had more...: vote illtalic |
i dont think your allowed to post other peoples explanations... remember, this is your opinion, not what someone else thought.. i need feedback, not the same reapeating breakdowns...
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