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Vinci 01-06-05 12:20 PM

MaRVJay1009 vs Vinci
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

g'luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-06-05 at 01:05 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

System 01-06-05 12:21 PM

Vinci has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:21 PM.

Vinci 01-06-05 12:33 PM

lets see......

Kill this dude....Why should i lose to this fake......His skills are shrewd...Soory Marv...Dont mean to be "Rude"...
"Pass up the W" cuz "I dont see you in this battle" You'll give me the easy win just like "Ur verse has been DQ'ed"//
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Bars is weak.....Compared to me sonny u nuttin....Ya Talk Is Cheap.....Ur skill will always remain "Bleak"...
Your an "Idiot When You Talk"....son I'll have you "Constantly Stutterin My Name" like "Retards Tryna Speak"//
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Man...I shouldnt mess wit this Punk...I got dude scared n runnin...afraid to put up his Fronts..Like dem "Weak Chumps"...
Scared of A "Lil Pressure?" i'll come at u "Full Velocity" so u can feel my "Full Force" just like lightin up "Gas Pumps"//

hmmmmmm...that should do....g'luck

System 01-06-05 12:43 PM

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:43 PM.

MaRVJay 01-06-05 12:53 PM

listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat..
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week".....
true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose...
rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's......
dis fag's a pre writer so there 4 everthing dis kid is spittin...
aint off da top its like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"......
4-0 ima stick da winnin..but fam i'll still pull da ruga.......
& leave ya head like "armani's family" it a be full of "toomers"..

last line...ya'll know dude from da giants...u'll get da punch

Vinci 01-06-05 01:30 PM

first bar......i neva did audio

second bar.....my win was 5-3...but w/e...use that to make ur verse look good i guess

uppin......

MaRVJay 01-06-05 02:05 PM

shut up fam u said alot of shit u neva did or i aint do

Acuity 01-06-05 02:16 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Vote: MaRVJay1009

ohhhhh Marv brand da HEAT lol his verse was dope
Vinci was ok, but MArv str8 killed it

listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat..
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week".....
bad asss wordplay sun...what...killin it wid dis punch -9/10
true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose...
rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's......
personal, only made betaa wid a link..tight-9/10
dis fag's a pre writer so there 4 everthing dis kid is spittin...
aint off da top its like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"......
what..what...tight wordplay..original....dope punch -8.5/10
4-0 ima stick da winnin..but fam i'll still pull da ruga.......
& leave ya head like "armani's family" it a be full of "toomers"..
i dont get dis im in UK, so it pro dus make sense, but had gd flow and structure - 8/10

MaRVJay1009 u got skills sun, drop like dis 24/7 and ur on ur way homeboy..:thumbup:

Kill this dude....Why should i lose to this fake......His skills are shrewd...Soory Marv...Dont mean to be "Rude"...
"Pass up the W" cuz "I dont see you in this battle" You'll give me the easy win just like "Ur verse has been DQ'ed"//
structure blaaahh, stretched as hell,no punch, but gd flow - 7.5/10
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Bars is weak.....Compared to me sonny u nuttin....Ya Talk Is Cheap.....Ur skill will always remain "Bleak"...
Your an "Idiot When You Talk"....son I'll have you "Constantly Stutterin My Name" like "Retards Tryna Speak"//
.structure blahh...played concept - 7/10
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Man...I shouldnt mess wit this Punk...I got dude scared n runnin...afraid to put up his Fronts..Like dem "Weak Chumps"...
Scared of A "Lil Pressure?" i'll come at u "Full Velocity" so u can feel my "Full Force" just like lightin up "Gas Pumps"//
no punch, more self glorification than anything - 7/10

Vinci work on more creative and original wittier punches

RETURN THA MOTHAFUCKIN FAVOUR Y'ALL LINKS IN SIG..PEACE..C.STEALTH BATTLE IS AN EASY HONEST VOTE

Vinci 01-06-05 03:00 PM

ight 0-1................uppin......................

MaRVJay 01-06-05 03:19 PM

aight uppin 4 some more votes........

(X)eed 01-06-05 06:23 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

vote goes 2 marv j no doub here ............aiight ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, you had puncehs good vocab and good word play vicni elevate,....is that ur alia vinci are u a vet or sum thin> anyways marv good battle here.......... hgood flow as well best line wuz listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat..
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week".....
^ lol hahah good wrd play yo RETURN FAVOUR MARV.............. in my battle below.........against me and Ncero Pyronix

MaRVJay 01-06-05 08:41 PM

aight fam goodlooks...uppin 4 more votes ya'll

Pleim 01-06-05 08:46 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat..
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week".....
true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose...
rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's

Dayum. marv brought het this time. the other guy had bad structure and streeeeeeeeched lines and bad punches. you need to elevate a lot more. but damn marv you are dope keep it up with the hot ass punches and complex wordplay.
v-marvjay1009
VOTE ON THE BATTLE IN MY SIG

MaRVJay 01-06-05 08:58 PM

goodlooks fam uppin 4 some more votes

MaRVJay 01-07-05 03:01 AM

uppin 4 more votes


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